First of all, them running into the incomplete world after a single paragraph was extremely anti-climatic given all the leadup about the void. Second, why is Leonel being branded by the regulator as a 5th dimensional being? His father had to break into the 9th to face that wrath didn’t he, or is there something else the regulator is looking at? Or is this world just that weak?

Got to love it when an author establishes all kinds of facts about a character’s health regeneration and then completely throws it out the window just so he can be dramatic in a later scene. How about some consistency instead of changing the rules of the world every other chapter?

This was a lot of buildup for nothing.

A chapter half-filled with the random gossip of some useless soldiers, great.

An entire chapter full of meaningless text that does nothing to advance the story.

Why so many consecutive paragraps of useless trash? Who wants to read the viewpoint of a random family on the street?

So much randomness and scene changing in a short amount of time.

Author, why would you bog down your big combat scenes with large chunks of annoying monologues from side characters?

This is all so tedious.

Eld Lady: Wu Yujin, be careful who you trust. 5 minutes later: Wu Yujin: Ok crazy plant lady with a knife at my neck, lets bond souls! Dumb.

The Elves couldn’t just reproduce normally over all that time? What are they ants now, and they need to sacrifice their elders?

Since when did Bai Zemin become such a useless panzy?

This identity crisis drama is pretty weak. If you wanted the readers to think less of the main character and this story then mission accomplished I guess.

For the love of god, do some ressearch on how nuclear weapons work if you are going to write about them. Wind isn’t going to stop the gamma radiation let alone the photon radiation that will set every surface in line of sight on fire within a good number of kilometers.

Why does the author keep saying Beijing university has “millions of students”? How ridiculousy and impossibly stupid. It has about 80k.

Why does he know Lilith’s blood type? This became so stupidly random. Author, please write when you are sober. This may be fun for you but it isn’t for us.

As if such randomness is needed when you already have so many plot threads going at once. No wonder this novel dies in a couple hundred chapters.

Author, literally 49% of Russia is covered in forest. Maybe if you don’t know much about the world you shouldn’t write about it. Even your knowledge of the geography of China is pretty poor, given how you describe it.

Why waste so much page space going on and on about some trash gargoyles?

Why did she say this was her first time doing this? This is exactly what they did before. This author doesn’t even know what they have written.