See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I like the way author's pov changing(although its something common). Out of that, the universe keep expanding and new characters keep coming in. Plus it feels like both a main char oriented and not oriented, which is to my liking. Pacing wise it got slower a lot but i hope i feel like it wont at some point or i dont know, maybe it never did since it cant be main char oriented too. Overall i think you should give it a try with all these different races and their own abilities stuff.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola