Well, it's better than most trashy fanfic and the development arc is better with explanation. There is literally short arc about Dragon Nest lol. It's not like they appear out of nowhere. Also your number off my friend and you didn't read the tags?
It's one of the best DD2 fanfic so far and quite interesting to read. it's somewhat of crossover and I like it.
The story 'is slow paced, but it's nice burn to read because rushing with no plot and just go gangho is not a good decision.
Hong Guan glanced at the formerly prideful Chu Yueli, but now she was nothing but a degenerate who desired to be hurt, with an amusing expression. "Oh, I raised her well. She has grown up now." She wiped some tears off her eyes.