Nice work! I am looking up to the next chapter. Please re edit your work. And check the spelling mistakes.

Great story. The plot is very nice The character design is almost perfect because of the mixture of teenage experiences. I think you must also make the character tougher to help with his development. The grammatical errors are alittle too much! Make sure to edit your story before you post them. However, your story is very nice and even though I don't really like martial arts stories, yours is the first one I really like. Keep I up!