Well it wouldn't be JJK without someone getting jumped.

This story needs some human interaction. How about doing a chapter or two of mc interacting with the main cast.

... well your at least your username checks out

But for real saving Elia will mess up Jorah characterization. imo

How can Jorah still simp after Ulfric's anti-simp ted talk? smh

Get the sword

ngl I also want to see a Doran pov (maybe we can have both?). Maybe starting with him dismissing Jorah as some low level lord to realizing how important became and that maybe Elia will still be alive if they got together. I think Elia will be dead by the time Jorah and his territory reaches its full potential, after the war.

Why do I get the feeling that Lex killed off the mom to make it easier for him to brainwash Felica?

You know I kinda like this. Love how MCs main power is cringe.

Its a no from me. I really want to know what happens next. Honestly you can just imply and continue the plot.

Harry is not a reincarnated person in this one.

Auxiliary chapters

You know I came for a badass Peter Parker. Maybe its just me but he doesn't really feel badass. I don't really know where you are going with this story. It feels like so far he hasn't have anything badass. I would recommend making him more un-compromising. Also he is supposed to be the Indian equivalent to a Navy Seal, but he doesn't act like it. He talks so much about his 'experience' but none of his actions reflect that. You should take example of how someone like Captain America acts for reference.

Short for mercenary

I would argue this is way more cruel. At least before they weren't forced to serve someone they hate. Honestly this is a bad change imo.

Kill him

I am fairly sure he is lying

lol Azula is an actual menace

I don't think the man can even feel emotions.

I just want someone realistic. Not someone like Tsunade, Mei, or Kohan.