Luxuriant
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Luxuriant24dReplied to Anime4_MePlease_5848Your right, I didn’t notice that typo, I think unconsciously wrote it forgetting about Yoda’s dialect. I’ll fix it next time I get a chance.
"We must talk about the future." Yoda explained before ending the transmission.- Luxuriant25dReplied to EmaCnDfCh 7 Detonation
- Luxuriant28dReplied to OverlordBGs
Bro’s live action looks like a bug💀
Now only five remained inside the command room: Plo-Koon, Ahsoka, Padme, Kit Fisto, and Revan. - Luxuriant28dReplied to Taro
He doesn’t have one in this story, at least currently…
'Master Yoda already told me about it, but to think a golden saber was actually created, and not passed down...' Windu commented inwardly. - Luxuriant28dReplied to cabooseiscool_1
While I never explicitly stated this, this story will be a kind of mix between legends and the animated clone wars series, among the movies too. So don’t expect things to be the exact same as canon, since it will be a mixture of a variety of sources.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Luxuriant28dReplied to cabooseiscool_1
Only time will tell…
A slight static went off at the tip of Revan's fingers, before surging with energy, as streams of golden lightning burst out with immense power. - Luxuriant28dReplied to Stevenking666
Remember this is just the beginnig of the story, their is much more to be done.
'Master Yoda already told me about it, but to think a golden saber was actually created, and not passed down...' Windu commented inwardly. - Luxuriant28dReplied to BrezerCh 6 Dooku and Grievous
- Luxuriant30dReplied to Heavenly_Terror
You’ll have to wait and see
If I were to propose an idea where I would allow the readers to vote on a specific storyline on where you want the story to go, would you guys be interested? Not just one storyline, but various ones that work well with the story and turn into multiple interesting arcs that I could expand on. - Luxuriant30dReplied to Brezer
Hey Brezer, I hope you like this story, unlike the other one😂
He masterfully blocked the red beams shot by the droids with his purple lightsaber, until suddenly Jango Fett in his Mandalorian armor appeared, spewing out fire from one of his wrist gadgets. - Luxuriant30dReplied to Erik_DNot too shabby, eh?
- Luxuriant30dReplied to Shallow_Thoughts
Nah it’s not like that, if I did it, it’ll be like I propose between two or more storylines for certain arcs and I let the readers choose which one they would find the most interesting. For example, let’s say my fanfiction was being reborn as Anakin, I could give the choice of him staying as a jedi and becoming the grandmaster, or becoming a Sith Lord, or a grey jedi, etc.
If I were to propose an idea where I would allow the readers to vote on a specific storyline on where you want the story to go, would you guys be interested? Not just one storyline, but various ones that work well with the story and turn into multiple interesting arcs that I could expand on. - Luxuriant30dReplied to Hyuga_Tobirama
I remember declining this same idea last time😂 Sorry bro, but my answer probably isn’t changing, but who knows.
While conflicted inwardly, Anakin decided to trust the Force, causing him to slightly relax, "While I don't understand you much, I hope we can talk more after, Master Revan." - Luxuriant1mthReplied to Erik_D
It’s understandable why some readers might feel annoyed, but you guys can’t just think of your own position. Writers have a life outside of writing, and stuff happens that might prohibit them from doing what they like, so being a little understanding for them, isn’t so bad. Of course you could argue maybe a writer shouldn’t be writing if he isn’t sure he can be consistent, but at the end of the day I am not forcing you to read. Just my thoughts though~
Not too shabby, eh? - Luxuriant1mthReplied to Travis_Btmb
Cmon buddy, no need to nitpick😂 Using words such as ‘Beam’ just sounds more natural then others. Think of it from a writing perspective, rather than a factual one.
He masterfully blocked the red beams shot by the droids with his purple lightsaber, until suddenly Jango Fett in his Mandalorian armor appeared, spewing out fire from one of his wrist gadgets. - Luxuriant1mthReplied to sagajr
I appreciate your due dillegence, but it’s highly possible that Venators were indeed available beforehand, as they were already in the naval forces of the galactic republic, albeit a very small amount. So you can’t simply say it’s incorrect or not accurate, when you yourself haven’t provided any sort of evidence. Which is because it was never explicitly stated if they were created beforehand or not. Or their are varying sources with different answers. At the end of the day, it’s up to your own interpretation, so saying I’m wrong, or even when I say I’m right, is simply our own opinion based on what we know.
Given his rank as a Master, Revan had been entrusted with temporary command over 80,000 Clone Troopers. These forces would later be divided among the rescued Jedi, each designated their own legions to lead into battle. For now, however, Revan led a modest fleet consisting of one Venator-Class Star Destroyer and six Acclamator-Class Star Destroyers. - Luxuriant1mthReplied to Dragonknight117Ch 3 Battle of Geonosis Begins