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Luxuriant

Luxuriant

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I will try my best to post at least 4 to 5 chapters a week :)

2022-04-17 JoinedUnited States
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant20min
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    "You must be General Raven. My name is Admiral Yularen, and I am the temporary Admiral for these ships sent by the Chancellor." The Admiral greeted as he extended his hand.
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    Luxuriant25min
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    With a slight breeze, the Gunship's door slid open, and two figures emerged, Yoda wore a light brown cloak and brown outfit underneath, with a brown staff, and right behind him was a young Togruta girl, wearing a brown tube top, brown skirt, and leggings.
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant28min
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    With a slight breeze, the Gunship's door slid open, and two figures emerged, Yoda wore a light brown cloak and brown outfit underneath, with a brown staff, and right behind him was a young Togruta girl, wearing a brown tube top, brown skirt, and leggings.
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant3h
    Replied to jebaom

    No, Silas has always had a unique helmet.

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    Replied to Iceling
    Ch 33 I'm Back! Star Wars: General of Clones
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  • Luxuriant
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    Replied to deter

    It’s entirely possible to have naturally red eyes, and for the most part, Sith eyes are usually yellow. But I see your point

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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to Kamikaze_Eagle

    But I don’t think there was ever a mutation, with a clone being able to use the FORCE. Perhaps the force mutated his appearance, or perhaps the Midi-Chlorians are what affected it. Nevertheless, it’s such a mysterious power we don’t even know the affects of it. So this could be well within reason. You can’t compare those fodder, to the MC😂

    Sitting on his bed, he took off his helmet, revealing his unique golden hair, and his piercing red eyes brimming with intellect.
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to Bloodicys

    Kind of, nonetheless I write the stories myself, but I let AI make my words sound better. But then I re-edit it, to make sure it doesn’t sound to sophisticated or complicated, this makes it better as I’m learning what to fix, while I write. However if you think it doesn’t sound good, or you see certain things that seem too much, just tell me so I can improve.

    Before chuckling softly to himself, a hint of amusement dancing in his emerald eyes.
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to Anubis_9876

    Perhaps, just watch and see, it’ll be much more interesting that way.

    Ch 1 Silas Raven
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to Brezer

    Minder? What do you mean?

    Ch 1 Silas Raven
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to Brezer

    I’ll take your point in to consideration, but like I replied before, I do agree that I made the way they became friends cheezy. But I’ll simply make it more realisitc this time and less ‘cheezy’😂, so don’t worry too much, the outcome will be better this time.

    Ch 2 General Raven
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to Brezer

    I see your point about that, but I feel like their should be a main dynamic between Silas and another character. So you think I should take out the dynamic between him and Anakin, but how can I replace that? Perhaps I could use the clones, but at best he has Commander Cody, and if we’re being honest not many clones are interesting. However, you think I should focus more on the Military dynamic between him and the clones? Wouldn’t that make the story too serious? How about this, I’ll keep the dynamic between Anakin and Silas, but I’ll severely edit it and make it more realistic and less cheezy🤔

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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to Brezer

    Bro, I missed you😂 But can you tell me how it’s getting stupid? I wanna see what I’m doing wrong.

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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to LemonZawodowiec

    Yeah😂 It connects to the fact that his souls merged with that foreign soul, so his Soul’s age will obviosuly increase, and he will get transported to the Soul Society as if he was that old.

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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant6h
    Replied to That_Annoying_guy

    For now he’ll just be messing around, like a play boy kind of, but between the women their will also be those he falls in love with, but their will also be women who don’t accept that kind of behavior in the story. So I guess you can call it a harem, but for now he’s not serious about any of them, and will only be with one of them at a time.

    Currently wearing the clothes he was given by Isane, which was a pristine black kimono.
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant16h
    Replied to Romant_Terry

    The concepts is very similar, so don’t worry too much!

    Ch 33 I'm Back! Star Wars: General of Clones
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  • Luxuriant
    Luxuriant16h
    Replied to TheEvilDragon23

    Nah the beginning of the story had horrible flow that would disinterest readers, his personality also seemed rather unlikeable. And since I also want Old readers to also experience these new changes in the MC, I realize this is the best way.

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    Replied to Shallow_Thoughts
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  • Luxuriant
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    Square formations of clones stood at attention, each row comprised of twenty soldiers, twenty ranks deep, creating a clear pathway down the center of the hangar. The sheer number of troops necessitated the opening of the hangar doors to accommodate them all.
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    Luxuriant18h
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    After a brief jog alongside his fellow troopers, Silas arrived at the vast hangar, teeming with thousands of clones clad in their uniform white armor. Among them stood only a handful adorned in colored armor.
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