I will try my best to post at least 4 to 5 chapters a week :)
No, Silas has always had a unique helmet.
It’s entirely possible to have naturally red eyes, and for the most part, Sith eyes are usually yellow. But I see your point
But I don’t think there was ever a mutation, with a clone being able to use the FORCE. Perhaps the force mutated his appearance, or perhaps the Midi-Chlorians are what affected it. Nevertheless, it’s such a mysterious power we don’t even know the affects of it. So this could be well within reason. You can’t compare those fodder, to the MC😂
Kind of, nonetheless I write the stories myself, but I let AI make my words sound better. But then I re-edit it, to make sure it doesn’t sound to sophisticated or complicated, this makes it better as I’m learning what to fix, while I write. However if you think it doesn’t sound good, or you see certain things that seem too much, just tell me so I can improve.
I’ll take your point in to consideration, but like I replied before, I do agree that I made the way they became friends cheezy. But I’ll simply make it more realisitc this time and less ‘cheezy’😂, so don’t worry too much, the outcome will be better this time.
I see your point about that, but I feel like their should be a main dynamic between Silas and another character. So you think I should take out the dynamic between him and Anakin, but how can I replace that? Perhaps I could use the clones, but at best he has Commander Cody, and if we’re being honest not many clones are interesting. However, you think I should focus more on the Military dynamic between him and the clones? Wouldn’t that make the story too serious? How about this, I’ll keep the dynamic between Anakin and Silas, but I’ll severely edit it and make it more realistic and less cheezy🤔
Bro, I missed you😂 But can you tell me how it’s getting stupid? I wanna see what I’m doing wrong.
Yeah😂 It connects to the fact that his souls merged with that foreign soul, so his Soul’s age will obviosuly increase, and he will get transported to the Soul Society as if he was that old.
For now he’ll just be messing around, like a play boy kind of, but between the women their will also be those he falls in love with, but their will also be women who don’t accept that kind of behavior in the story. So I guess you can call it a harem, but for now he’s not serious about any of them, and will only be with one of them at a time.
Nah the beginning of the story had horrible flow that would disinterest readers, his personality also seemed rather unlikeable. And since I also want Old readers to also experience these new changes in the MC, I realize this is the best way.