As the other reviewers said. The writer does seem experienced with writing, but might not be on this genre. I did find some concordance problems and mayor spelling errors. However, it's not the writer first language, and he is still doing a better job than the ones who have the advantage of having the language as the native one. The author likes feedbacks and his readers thoughts, in which is also good. About the story, overall, it's an excellent one if you like more character developments and mysteries. It's interesting how the story is based on the baby's pov. I recommend and I'll keep reading it.