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Hey auther I really like the story but can you make the mc out to be the main guy and auther then the Griffendor squad, and there are other interesting characters in sliderine like pansy Parkinson or children from other neutral houses, on another note why is it that the mc is being feared and hated on for simply being the grandson of a dark Lorax while there are children of death rather in hogwards and no one cares about them, if you tone down the side character hating mc for no reason the the sorry would be perfect oh and is Casey potter the mfl, she a good choice
It’s not, only the talented one can, for example lily potter, Harry’s mother could use wander’s magic like creating flowers as a child it’s not something exceptional just that most children aren’t able to spend time attempting sicne they will naturally be able to use it at 11 to why waste time and most those that really have the patience and talent do so which is rare so there you have it
Auther is an idiot
He’s not black, he has blond hair morons
Level 1 and 2 spells were enough for him to best Slytherins from noble families so I’d assume level 3 is enough to pass pass the owls and level 4 is Hogwarts graduation level/ adult wizard level, level 5 would be elite arura/heads of Wizarding families and level 6 is is where the teachers as hogwards are at most one catageary like McGonagall would be level 6 for transmigration or Snape would be level 6 for potion making and I’d assume dumbeldore and Voldemort are level 7 is spell casting
He had 500 and used 300 hundred for practice and after the overall yearly analasis he got rewarded 850 points so he has 1050
That dragon that hagrid hatched in his hut
She is he acting like an idiot when you mentioned multiple times that he was calm and mature multiple times already, please keep it consistent, I mean he travels back in time and reincarnated as a baby so no matter what happens after that you shouldn’t be shocked especially not after seeing someone else go will probably be famous, it’s not that big of a deal
There were others that also had it since birth and as he just mentioned he’s a special case since he in a reincarnated unlike them and he did it by accident and his special circumstances while they relied on talent
Guys kakashis chakra is constantly being drained by obituary sharingan so I doubt he even has 80 percent of his chakra at all times and I don’t think his chakra has any major growth after that incident and also adult sasuke faced a similar issue of having the renegan active which consumes mastic chakra and he was also a massively nerfed in boruto like naruto so I doubt it’s useful to compare but in the 4th war im pretty sure sasuke could make 100 shadow clones easy
Sensory skills have a lot to do with yin release which is dependent on the soul and since sasuke has indaras chakra he has talent in it and him transmigrating and having a adults soul combined with the ems is more then enough for him to become one of the best sensors with even a year or 2 of training and even without it his senses shousl be really powerfull
Although it sound weak but this is ancient times and especially a cultivation world so I doubt the table isn’t made from thick wood and really tough and being able to break it into pieces would require a ton of force or more
Like a braindead moron, go againt geir husban or partner even if they are right simply because they are men, do thing that men do rather their own duties as a wife like having children and instead work and defy their husbands wishes every opportunity they get, act like a victim and cry while also presenting to be a ‘strong independent women’ while her whole life resolves being dependent on men
Men and women are different
Men and women are different
It’s the same logic that applied to Harry’s and voldemorts wands that are apparently brother since they are made with the same source at the same time and carry the same magic so they couldn’t kill one another so Voldemort had to look for the elderwand as a repalacement