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  • DaoistpJXQGf
    DaoistpJXQGf1yr
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    Reading this novel is like reading a war in a cultivation novel where both sites have nascent soul cultivators, but the main character spends hundreds of chapters to help the sect create foundation building disciples.

    Ch 2635 One Day More 
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • DaoistpJXQGf
    DaoistpJXQGf1yr
    Replied to Ishan_Rajwade

    Unlikely. The Author LOVES his underdog character that has to work 10 times harder than anybody else, for half the result.

    Ch 2546 14%
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • DaoistpJXQGf
    DaoistpJXQGf2yr
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    Hey PurpleSpring, I am enjoying your story but there is one thing that is really bothering me. By the way, this is just my opinion and if you think otherwise you are free to ignore it. This is your story after all. The one thing bothering me is the underutilization of the System. I like the concept of a mixture between his own talent/effort together with system rewards but there are way too little system quests and rewards. You can spam rewards without them being useful for the main character. For example pills that help someone break through nascent soul realm. It doesn’t matter if the sect has 10 or a 1000 nascent soul experts. There are tons of other rewards that don’t help the MC directly but could help the sect like rare herbs, metals, potion recipes or potions, rare weapon blue prints or weapons, protection talismans for disciples, cultivation mantras and so on. The second point is the inconsistency of the system. Like why did he get potion mastery from one disciple but doesn’t get blacksmithing mastery from the other? Why are there no rewards when his disciple broke through the expert rank in alchemy? In general rewards for achievements from the disciple would be nice. Like during the alchemy competition, his disciple got second place and got absolutely nothing from the system. Rewards could be like a sudden epiphany that helps break through a realm or several and the master could decide when to start the epiphany for his disciple. One of his disciples is currently on a journey, at the end of the journey there could be an evaluation, like how much did he improve? , how far did he travel? , how many people did he fight/kill? etc. and then corresponding rewards could be given. This would also shorten the distance between master and disciples. After all the master is talented and has a lot help from the system. So to sum up the feedback. There is no need to fear spamming rewards. Some loot is always better than no loot and in a SYSTEM novel titled “Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough” watching the MC get a movement technique by watching someone kill a rat but get nothing if the disciple manages the breakthrough to expert rank and get the number 2 spot to in a tournament is very vexing to read.

    Ch 539 News Reaches the Cardinal
    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern · PurpleSpring
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  • DaoistpJXQGf
    DaoistpJXQGf2yr
    Replied to LordOrangeSoda

    The contract stipulates occasionally. He could have waited until he is stronger. I know the reason that was given is that he is getting “rusty” and I also know that he is playing because he is thankful but I just hope he will also profit from those plays. There is no reason why Asna (or Sphinx) shouldn’t open side bets with things that help Felix get stronger like those natural treasures or whatever they are called here. It will be difficult to collect enough of those otherwise. And lastly the wishes have all sever limits. In case of resources the limit would me monetary. So how much is a diamond wish worth? Even if it is 1 Trillion. It will become soon difficult to collect enough resources for him.

    Ch 765 Spinning The Wheel.
    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • DaoistpJXQGf
    DaoistpJXQGf2yr
    Commented

    Hey Midgard, I hope you can make the games a little more relevant for Felix again. The money from the games is now peanuts, the game points haven’t mattered since bronze and he got more of them there and the wishes don’t seem to be that useful anymore because he mostly used them to hide or circumcise really dumb rules. The Information upgrade seemed too insignificant in front of the Sphinx. The only wish that helped improve his strength is the last one and the majority of that was once again because of the Sphinx. There is no reason anymore that justifies his obsession with them and the need to play them so much expect of course the progenitor bets. But Felix has played 3 such games and only profited directly from a single one. So I hope you will find a way to make the games more relevant for Felix. For example drastically improve the power of wishes or increase the progenitor bets with stuff that helps Felix like natural treasurers or whatever the stuff is that he eats to get stronger.

    Ch 765 Spinning The Wheel.
    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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