red_muoru
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"None Can Lift The Quain Stone Alone"
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red_muoru2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue: Chapter 1: Ridiculous- red_muoru2yrCommented
I can't stop laughing LOL
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author don't like childhood friends... Was you rejected by one of them? .-.
"Don't try to beat around the bush. Just say she is a childhood friend. Am I wrong?" - red_muoru2yrCommented
I think it was a good time. I love you doesn't mean "marry me". it's totally plausible to Akari say this.
She took a deep breath before saying, "I love you." - red_muoru2yrCommented
A chapter per week with more or less 2500 words means 10000 words for a month. It would be more wise to the starters, I guess... Many of us have others jobs and studies to do, you know.
Those are all the prerequisite conditions for newcomer authors to develop into starter level webnovel authors. At this level, the quality of your writing isn't that important. Nor is the popularity of your novel important, either. Being able to write a long novel and write quickly are the two main goals that you as a newcomer author should strive for. - red_muoru2yrCommentedIt had been a few days since Makoto san and Nakano sand started going out. I had no idea they liked each other, so it really came as a surprise. But ever since then his previous depressed mood has been completely swept away, so at least that is good.
- red_muoru2yrCommentedShe placed her hands on the back of my neck and I pulled her face closer than ever. I could clearly see my reflection in her violet eyes at this distance. We both just stared at each other for what must have been a solid minute before Nakano slowly closed her eyes and I leaned towards her.
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thanks for the help...
"Ah no. I am going to my house. Nakano san will be enough to take care of you." - red_muoru2yrCommentedWell, obviously this is an awkward situation for the three people involved, but secretly I am grateful as well. I mean they completely took the fire off my and Nakano's backs.
- red_muoru2yrCommented"No buts, you already promised. Don't worry its safe today, my parent are not at home."
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chuuni... haha I got it.
Back in middle school when I first realized my trait I thought I was the only one with such an ability. However, that delusion was quickly crushed. I soon realized there were others too. Many times, I tried to manipulate people into going along with what I wanted but failed. Due to my trait being related to observation I quickly realized what, or rather who, was causing it. After that day I had always tried to record every trait I observed. Of course, naming abilities was something I did on my own. It is a chuuni habit that I still have. - red_muoru2yrCommented
I think my trait is too similar with Makoto's Well, I pretty good in others behavior analysis. And I can put attention in multiples chats and people near of me. it's kinda useful, but really, really exhausting.
Essentially a trait is nothing but using your mind more effectively. It is a way to control your subconscious behaviour and actions. I have been mentioning about how mental energy is required for any trait to work. However, mental energy is not some magical thing like mana or qi, it is simply the amount you can concentrate. What Shimabukuro did was not some genjutsu shit, she just scolded Tanaka harshly. It is the same as you being scared of your parents scolding you when you were a kid. To you they may have seemed extremely scary when angry, but to others they were just scolding you as they should have. Usually, a trait is something that is born out of your past experiences, traumas, and also, your current social standing. - red_muoru2yrCommented
Should I try to do that?
This is my self-developed secret technique of waking yourself up in less than 5 seconds. By setting the alarm tone to a cringy anime song you lay a trap for yourself. If you don't wake up and shut down the alarm as soon as it starts ringing, everyone will know the kind of trashy songs you like. Just imagine your parents hearing the lucky star opening go off and wonder where they went wrong with raising you. - red_muoru2yrCommentedCh 31 Continued
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wow dude, it was just a joke, okay?
"Shimabukuro san already has someone she likes, and that person does not seem to be you." - red_muoru2yrCommented
author toys with clichés... omedetto
Unfortunately, I was able to hear her cursed words. The stuff she does is straight-up content for some yandere stories. Like could you not do the stereotypical things that every standard yandere does for 5 seconds? - red_muoru2yrCommentedJust when I took a bite of my burger, I saw Nishikawa doing something unforgivable. He fed by Shimabukuro san right in front of my eyes, with his own two hands.
- red_muoru2yrCommentedHer expression turned even worse when she heard my words. Now it's my turn to ask. To be honest I proposed this turn-wise minigame because I know of a way to cheat. I can ask her two questions that seem to be one. This way I can ask her double the information while telling her half the answers.
- red_muoru2yrCommented"If you don't leave, I will shout loudly now."
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dude, She's going to, OK? it's just a matter of time...
Leaning on the wall and lost in my thoughts, as I was on the verge of attaining nirvana, Nishikawa and Shimabukuro came out of the store they were in. I hurriedly turned my body, hoping they wouldn't see me. Thankfully they didn't notice me and continued to the next store.