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It said although he lost that root nothing changed
Further down it said people eat them so he would just end up wasting his life span if someone came after he left and bought it then ate it.
Thx that helped me imagine it a lot better
Don’t forget his sister was supposed to get married and possibly start a family after she awakened at 14
Aye I don’t know how much of this you will take to heart but I just wanted to say that you used “shadows whispering secrets” a lot to the point I got very confused if they really were talking or not just saying you repeated a lot there are other phrases but I don’t feel like typing them.
I’m confused didn’t he just get to the village and what’s with the calling names(when did he learns name who did he meet aside from the receptionist and the person that told him where the hunters guild was) why is he calling it his home etc I understand the Avenge the villagers but not because he knows them like it is portraying, but because they were innocent, even then, he shouldn’t care much because he’s only been human for a few months.