so far I really like the book it's a couple of flaws that I don't like but I'm very impressed with this book with the first black characterI know it's not a big deal the most the yard but to a guy that read a lot of books and I mean a lot to family read a book with somebody that's black as the main character and going through the motions and ain't doing them dirtyonly problem I say with the book I got is the fact that he goes to the very ends of the Earth for his first love Choice which I'm not understanding because the girl hasn't done anything so far I'm a chapter 400 and somethingnow she say all the time how much she loved him but what has she done to show thatout of these 400 chapters I have read I say 300 of them are about the troubles that she brings so far and it's ongoingit's shocking the second girl he fell in love with will not mention the fact that she brings nothing but trouble and it's been very widely known that if her family makes her marry someone elseshe will marry them and justified in some form of Fashion on why she doing it for himthe first time her brother stabbed him almost in his heart and she convinced herself oh he wanted me to live so I'm going to marry him and live now the king son wanna which everybody in the world wanted for some strange reason but he won't

Are you kidding me? You guys know, for a fact? Miss Amy deserved to get him pregnated. And you guys voted no, he probably even touched the other girl, miss Amy is all-powerful being what do you got against powerful women? You guys really let me down, but I bet you guys are the main ones, Reno's novels where the guy gets 30 million wives and the pregnant all of them like that's realistic, all I was asking for was 2 women. Is that too much 2 women? That's it realistically 5 but 2 women. That's all. I wanted and yacht to that away from me so now.

man out of all the book i have read this is number 2 Vampire slice of life is number 1 I like the fact that he has a lot of love interest, but he knows that he is loyalty. Lies with Lil of any other body. Any other writer would have just made him make everybody. His girlfriend, everybody did he come across. Even the girl that he claimed to be his enemy. He would have put her in to the harem. So so yeah, you're doing a good job, bro. more r18 in im good keep Writing writing

am I the only one that noticed how they take these MCS from being dudes that can't get no girls to get in all the girls like it's just easy but I'm sorry most of the time you guys write these MCS getting all these women in real life if you had a girlfriend you will understand there's no way you can juggle all these women women need attention how would you give a woman that's one of the most spiteful creatures on Earth just food for thought when Writing your next book I like the fact how your MC builds a relationship with the women and don't have so many women. But you missed some of the sex scenes, bro.another thing that makes me so mad is how they try to be so sympathetic to every situation liked the foreman the they let everybody live man I hope his revenge is solid I haven't got to that part yet but if he ain't killing some shit I ain't going to be satisfied I ain't going to lie

read hero of darkness thats good writing

cap I guess hes the best writer in the world because he makes the main character loses his powers over and over

what I noticed about you as To an author you got a real Obsession about losing everything and trying to gain it back you didn't did this about 30 times in this book so far Really I stuck by you at the beginning because I'm like OKD right but man this man lost his power so many time Is so many different types of situations you just He just got done with this you monkeys fight just to find out his mama couldn't get all that by herself and still would have been able to beat the strongest duty couldn't be so it's like it was all for nothing now is mama gonna die all for nothing What the say like I thought you were a good writer I still do think you good rider but me

I don't know if I should call you a bad writer or a writer that at every cliche everything that people hate about books or storylines you added into all your books I have read the vampire system book in the dragon system book stop the vampire system book around $900 and something because I kept trying to give it more and more trials because the World building was good but if there's anything that people hate about a certain book other than harems all the other cliches like somebody that you know can't defeat something going on to do it 101 knowing if they going to get captured die and forced everybody else to run in those are the type of things that he writing to these books and that's why I say I don't know if I should call you a bad writer or just a cliche writer basically come up with some new ideas stop making it so obvious your plots are so obvious man that is so annoying that I invest so much time and reading your book just to see a good story turn into trash

slow down it getting to be to many women

So far 270 chapters in I have seen the most naive person the most self gratifying person in my life and I keep telling myself the stupidity of the character must be the stupidity of the writer because he thinks hes smart we're really got me to the point where I was like oh I'm done with the book was the suckers and I'm not talking about people I'm literally talking about lollipops when he made the decision to use the girl as bait I say how he handles this is going to determine if I keep reading the book and I'm guessing you guys can guess by reading instead he haven't been pretty bad b At this point I can just imagine how bad it's going to be when he actually start having sex with these women you cannot just brush over everything with oh I really let this happen to her see the man that's literally trying to rape your woman and just say oh we need to find out if someone is a bug film no obviously there is obviously you're not gonna get that's right but let's keep using her as bait until we find out who that person is even if he rapes her it's allright as long as we find out who that person is oh that's not worry about all the hundreds of other women that hes That this man already raped in the school let's not worry about that the writer wants you to get to the last moment where hes plan actually gets laid out people die and you cry because you feel like it's your fault when you could have stopped it at the beginning

a man i fuck with you alot of these people. be Virgins That never got to touch a girl so they be so excited when it's 6 things that they don't see the bad writing people that actually have experience real experiences in life we see the horrible righthe number one rule and a transmigrator is to never tell people you're a transmit greater or openly display technology from our world once you break this rule you must have a good reason on why other than that I like your honesty most of the reviews are just because it is sex things Right now I'm reading reincarnated with the strongest system and all the reviews say it's the best book ever but me I see stupidity at its finest in he hasn't even fk a girl yet Usually bad books start off with a lot of sex saying they try to get Em with girls fast as possible this guy didn't do that so I keep giving them chances like hopefully he'll get better as the story progress But I'm 270 chapters and I had to take a break cause I'm almost Rage to quit

what makes me the most frustrated is that he has all these other classes of magic he can learn but he choose toso only use two Magics the one that's shown by the world and the other one his ex-fiancee uses

I'm not understanding how many chapters we supposed to read before start getting good but at the point I'm at is chapter 86 and it's so far it's just the whole bunch of trash I'm constantly giving the Arthur more and more chances to try to improve his writing but at this point I'm just like I don't know and then I see everybody else's comments and I feel like we reading a totally different novel I have nothing against his goat but you gave a fighting companion is a goat I'm like okay maybe he'll get more animals and atom apart of his team but know he's Full Throttle on making the team of goats he loses his magic I'm like okay now he's going to learn swordsmanship nope he cries with his goat I'm like okay maybe when the fight starts he's going to say oh wait come back in five years and we can fight know you get his ass beat and let the do walk away if the story is going like this I can just imagine what's going to happen when he have kids or girls to start this imagine haremso please can I get some real comments cuz so far all I see is comments time I this is the best book they have ever read

I'm not understanding how many chapters we supposed to read before start getting good but at the point I'm at is chapter 86 and it's so far it's just the whole bunch of trash I'm constantly giving the Arthur more and more chances to try to improve his writing but at this point I'm just like I don't know and then I see everybody else's comments and I feel like we reading a totally different novel I have nothing against his goat but you gave a fighting companion is a goat I'm like okay maybe he'll get more animals and atom apart of his team but know he's Full Throttle on making the team of goats he loses his magic I'm like okay now he's going to learn swordsmanship nope he cries with his goat I'm like okay maybe when the fight starts he's going to say oh wait come back in five years and we can fight know you get his ass beat and let the do walk away if the story is going like this I can just imagine what's going to happen when he have kids or girls to start this imagine haremso please can I get some real comments cuz so far all I see is comments time I this is the best book they have ever read

I'm not understanding how many chapters we supposed to read before start getting good but at the point I'm at is chapter 86 and it's so far it's just the whole bunch of trash I'm constantly giving the Arthur more and more chances to try to improve his writing but at this point I'm just like I don't know and then I see everybody else's comments and I feel like we reading a totally different novel I have nothing against his goat but you gave a fighting companion is a goat I'm like okay maybe he'll get more animals and atom apart of his team but know he's Full Throttle on making the team of goats he loses his magic I'm like okay now he's going to learn swordsmanship nope he cries with his goat I'm like okay maybe when the fight starts he's going to say oh wait come back in five years and we can fight know you get his ass beat and let the do walk away if the story is going like this I can just imagine what's going to happen when he have kids or girls to start this imagine haremso please can I get some real comments cuz so far all I see is comments time I this is the best book they have ever read

FYI when you hear any story about a pedophile and they say the pedophile groomed the girl that's exactly what he's doing he groomed those girls look up the definition and tell me the story that the writer wrote is not grooming

all you guys are sick i do not judge any novel without giving it a chance i have read up to 634 so i gave this novel more than a couple of chances first down fall of the novel MC is one of the biggest Hypocrites in the world second I'm not judging him for sleeping with Jessica and Lilith because he didn't know but when he did find out that should have been cut off immediately memory should have been sealed and there shouldn't have been no chance of him sleeping with Rebecca watching the kid grow up and then pursuing them in a sexual relationship if that ain't pedophile activity I don't know what it is second of all he purposely had a baby two babies knowing that he was not going to be in a life do you know how many kids grow up without their father and nothing but hatred form there ain't no way you can explain that to them grown kids and now the girl has feelings for him and then the mama let's get back to their mama she knew he wanted her to take her of Rebecca and Jessica but for some strange reason she magically let somebody trick her out the house and all she did to help them out was give her a job when she has hundreds of stores didn't make her a manager didn't give her no money and say you didn't have to work what he do still accept her into his harem and none of you guys see nothing wrong with it long story short this book is one punch man that goes around collecting women he never gives any of these girls real chances to deny him let's be honest he does not give them no chance to deny him his power is to get whatever he wants so where is the option to deny if he wants you get you if that ain't rape I don't know what it is

all you guys are sick i do not judge any novel without giving it a chance i have read up to 634 so i gave this novel more than a couple of chances first down fall of the novel MC is one of the biggest Hypocrites in the world second I'm not judging him for sleeping with Jessica and Lilith because he didn't know but when he did find out that should have been cut off immediately memory should have been sealed and there shouldn't have been no chance of him sleeping with Rebecca watching the kid grow up and then pursuing them in a sexual relationship if that ain't pedophile activity I don't know what it is second of all he purposely had a baby two babies knowing that he was not going to be in a life do you know how many kids grow up without their father and nothing but hatred form there ain't no way you can explain that to them grown kids and now the girl has feelings for him and then the mama let's get back to their mama she knew he wanted her to take her of Rebecca and Jessica but for some strange reason she magically let somebody trick her out the house and all she did to help them out was give her a job when she has hundreds of stores didn't make her a manager didn't give her no money and say you didn't have to work what he do still accept her into his harem and none of you guys see nothing wrong with it all I got to say is this is the MC that they joke about and most Harem animes when you heard joking an anime and the MC saying I'm not that type of protagonist this is who they're talking about if you never got the joke read this book and you won't understand it

that what i would like to know

my top web novels at the moment just slow down on his women intake there is a cap on how many women one person needs other than that keep it up less sex scenes