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I'm not saying this because I can live without this book, I can and I sincerely want to. You'll have absolutely no idea what this story is even remotely about with characters doing stuff for seemingly no reason because the author refuses to explain anything and just throws you into the scene and leaves you to wonder what you're even reading on your own. Synopsis doesn't help either since it's completely ambiguous, almost like the author doesn't want you to even understand what this story is about. Maybe if the author spends less time making fake accounts to praise their own writing, this book could be better. Heck, they even used their own author account to tell themselves "Good job" like as if we can't tell that it's the author themselves saying that.
You forgot to delete the AI's response to your AI Generated story...
Oh yeah sure... The guy with the rich heir background who was forced to take over the company from a young age and had to focus on making his company rise to the top also has the time to learn how to do his own chores and cook his own food, not to mention even how to hunt, skin, clean and preserve his hunt. At this point you might as well just make him someone who has lived in this world instead of a transmigrator since it's obvious his past life doesn't matter at all. Sorry, but I can't take your character seriously.
Ok, let's just assume that this guy decided to end his own life despite having supposedly all the luxuries in the world because he got tired of the responsibilities that came with it. He's now in an even worse position than he was before and he just decides to say ok, let's live this life now instead of trying to end my own life again. Your set up for this character makes no sense, it feels like you set up his background of being some rich guy just to satisfy your own wants instead of an actual need for him to have such a background. It would have made more sense if his previous life was worse than his new one or else why would he suddenly just change his mind for no reason and choose to continue living again?
You don't understand, I get you don't want to spoil your story or whatever but right now I have no idea what is even going to happen in your story. From your synopsis and your review, I can't even tell if your world is a cultivation world, a fantasy world, or the real world but with supernatural elements. I can't tell if your MC is supposed to be a character that starts off weak and grows stronger or he's strong from the start. I can't even tell what the goal of your MC or even the goal of your story even is. Is your MC fighting the horrors? Is he giving up and going to another world? Is he going to become an internet superstar? I don't know because you don't want to tell us anything. Since you gave me nothing interesting to look forward to in your synopsis, I might as well don't take the risk of wasting my time here and just go read another book that clearly tells me what is interesting about it instead of being so ambiguous. If you want to attract people to read your book, at least tell us what is interesting about it instead of writing so many words that don't tell us anything. I wasn't even complaining about your synopsis being long, I was saying how it's both long and pointless at the same time.
So what is this book even about? You seen to have a knack for saying a lot of things but also nothing at the same time. Your synopsis is so long but it doesn't even tell me what this book is about and telling me that I can "expect a lot" but then contradicting yourself by saying to "keep it down" isn't explaining anything. Don't tell me to read the book to find out, I want to know what I'm getting into before committing myself. If you don't even want to let me know what I can expect than why shouldn't I just go and read another book instead? You've given me zero incentive to even open your book so far.
As someone who has read all of Draekai's works so far, I'm once again quite amazed by what has been done here. First it was cultivation, then it was a westernized fantasy, now we're also getting sci-fi, all of them wonderfully created. Writing a good story in one genre is a feat but 3? That's just amazing. Already I can see how big the universe for this story might be with just the front chapters. You have warp gates, cybernetics, gene mods and everything all put into one. I can't wait to see where this story leads.
Don't expect much because this book is AI generated. And it's not even generated well either... Why would you even start your story with 6 chapters of introduction? Do you not know how to introduce your characters organically and naturally in the story? Oh wait, because the AI can't do that so you need to ask it to do that first.
Hey you, do you want to read something but find that you don't have the time? Then look no further than this one! Where you can just skip all the boring words and just read the stats that appears on every single chapter (Sometimes it even appears more than 3 times in a single chapter with the barest of changes! Gain a new skill? Copy and paste the entire stats again!) up until chapter 15 before the author got tired of doing that and resorted to using ChatGPT to write for them instead! Much story! Very content! Many effort!!
This makes absolutely no sense. If the company was the one who fired you, they will need to give you severance pay. Unless you did something wrong which led to you being fired, it will not be 'seen as a negative mark' on your employment history. Otherwise, it can just be explained away in your job interviews. If you were to resign, you not only won't receive any severance pay, it would be even harder to explain in your future work as well. So no, deciding to quit instead of being fired is NOT a big brain move, in fact it's a really stupid decision. Either author really has no experience working in the real world or the companies they worked for are really screwed up for them to think this is normal.
You're trying too hard to use big words to appear sophisticated that this looks really pretentious instead. It's like listening to a snobbish person ramble about a topic they have no expertise in and being insulted by them for not being as 'sophisticated' as they are. I'm not even going to comment on how abrupt the events are happening in this story either.
Which really just translates to you spending more time getting people you know to leave inaccurate reviews of your book which do not reflect the actual state of your book. It really doesn't make this situation any better, you realise? Your reviews section is basically filled with unreliable reviews. Time that might be better spent editing the mistakes you have in your writing.