webnovel
avatar
0
Honestwords

Honestwords

Lv3

I speak honestly

2022-04-05 JoinedGlobal
0.2h

of reading

1265

Read books

Badges

6

Moments

62
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords3d
    Replied to AppleGreenSheep

    It's not that hard to get more chapters. Just ask the 'author' what prompt he used and then go and generate the story yourself since this book is clearly AI generated.

    altalt
    Echoes of the Fallen Star
    Fantasy · Insignia
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords3d
    Posted

    I'm not saying this because I can live without this book, I can and I sincerely want to. You'll have absolutely no idea what this story is even remotely about with characters doing stuff for seemingly no reason because the author refuses to explain anything and just throws you into the scene and leaves you to wonder what you're even reading on your own. Synopsis doesn't help either since it's completely ambiguous, almost like the author doesn't want you to even understand what this story is about. Maybe if the author spends less time making fake accounts to praise their own writing, this book could be better. Heck, they even used their own author account to tell themselves "Good job" like as if we can't tell that it's the author themselves saying that.

    altalt
    I accidentally married a seductress
    Fantasy · Felicity_Uhomonye
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords1mth
    Commented

    I think you mean "First official book that I've AI Generated and then edited but later got too lazy to edit in the later chapters and just copied it completely from the AI".

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Starting Line
    altalt
    A Hunter who is broken
    Fantasy · Kenneth_Ponteras19
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords1mth
    Commented

    You forgot to delete the AI's response to your AI Generated story...

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    Ascending through Yuga
    Fantasy · BlackUndead
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords2mth
    Commented

    Oh yeah sure... The guy with the rich heir background who was forced to take over the company from a young age and had to focus on making his company rise to the top also has the time to learn how to do his own chores and cook his own food, not to mention even how to hunt, skin, clean and preserve his hunt. At this point you might as well just make him someone who has lived in this world instead of a transmigrator since it's obvious his past life doesn't matter at all. Sorry, but I can't take your character seriously.

    Ch 6 Let him cook!
    altalt
    Cold Mercenary
    Action · BeautifulLie
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords2mth
    Commented

    Ok, let's just assume that this guy decided to end his own life despite having supposedly all the luxuries in the world because he got tired of the responsibilities that came with it. He's now in an even worse position than he was before and he just decides to say ok, let's live this life now instead of trying to end my own life again. Your set up for this character makes no sense, it feels like you set up his background of being some rich guy just to satisfy your own wants instead of an actual need for him to have such a background. It would have made more sense if his previous life was worse than his new one or else why would he suddenly just change his mind for no reason and choose to continue living again?

    Ch 2 Awakening
    altalt
    Cold Mercenary
    Action · BeautifulLie
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords2mth
    Replied to DefeatedNinth_LRNS

    Not really much of any writing being done here since this story is AI generated.

    altalt
    Shadows of Mythalis
    Fantasy · DefeatedNinth_LRNS
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords2mth
    Replied to Ordki_Hozei

    You don't understand, I get you don't want to spoil your story or whatever but right now I have no idea what is even going to happen in your story. From your synopsis and your review, I can't even tell if your world is a cultivation world, a fantasy world, or the real world but with supernatural elements. I can't tell if your MC is supposed to be a character that starts off weak and grows stronger or he's strong from the start. I can't even tell what the goal of your MC or even the goal of your story even is. Is your MC fighting the horrors? Is he giving up and going to another world? Is he going to become an internet superstar? I don't know because you don't want to tell us anything. Since you gave me nothing interesting to look forward to in your synopsis, I might as well don't take the risk of wasting my time here and just go read another book that clearly tells me what is interesting about it instead of being so ambiguous. If you want to attract people to read your book, at least tell us what is interesting about it instead of writing so many words that don't tell us anything. I wasn't even complaining about your synopsis being long, I was saying how it's both long and pointless at the same time.

    altalt
    Master Of Horrors
    Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords3mth
    Replied to Ordki_Hozei

    So what is this book even about? You seen to have a knack for saying a lot of things but also nothing at the same time. Your synopsis is so long but it doesn't even tell me what this book is about and telling me that I can "expect a lot" but then contradicting yourself by saying to "keep it down" isn't explaining anything. Don't tell me to read the book to find out, I want to know what I'm getting into before committing myself. If you don't even want to let me know what I can expect than why shouldn't I just go and read another book instead? You've given me zero incentive to even open your book so far.

    altalt
    Master Of Horrors
    Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords3mth
    Posted

    As someone who has read all of Draekai's works so far, I'm once again quite amazed by what has been done here. First it was cultivation, then it was a westernized fantasy, now we're also getting sci-fi, all of them wonderfully created. Writing a good story in one genre is a feat but 3? That's just amazing. Already I can see how big the universe for this story might be with just the front chapters. You have warp gates, cybernetics, gene mods and everything all put into one. I can't wait to see where this story leads.

    altalt
    What Do You Mean I'm The Captain Of A Yandere Mercenary Company?
    Sci-fi · Draekai
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords3mth
    Commented

    I would think that using AI to generate a story seems kind of a cheap way to fulfil that new year 'solution' of yours.

    Ch 1 Prologue
    altalt
    Echo of Valor
    Fantasy · JoyOfBoy
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords5mth
    Posted

    This 'story' has more system messages than actual story itself. It feels like I'm reading a log of a game instead of an actual story. If you like reading pages upon pages of nothing but inventory, character stats, item stats and anything but actual story, you can read this.

    altalt
    From Earth to a Hellish World
    Fantasy · Cosmictear
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords5mth
    Replied to Asta_utsugi

    Because I primarily read on the website and not the app. The tracker does not track my reading time on the website. I don't even know why you're using this as an argument in the first place like as if this changes the fact that your book is AI generated.

    altalt
    How the world turned me into a villain
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords5mth
    Posted

    Don't expect much because this book is AI generated. And it's not even generated well either... Why would you even start your story with 6 chapters of introduction? Do you not know how to introduce your characters organically and naturally in the story? Oh wait, because the AI can't do that so you need to ask it to do that first.

    altalt
    How the world turned me into a villain
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords6mth
    Posted

    If I wanted to read an AI generated story, I wouldn't need to come here to read one. This 'author' didn't even realise the AI stopped generating the story partway and they copied an incomplete generation with each chapter being cut off.

    altalt
    Ignited Destiny: The Elemental Odyssey
    Eastern · Kirisuna1
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords7mth
    Posted

    Hey you, do you want to read something but find that you don't have the time? Then look no further than this one! Where you can just skip all the boring words and just read the stats that appears on every single chapter (Sometimes it even appears more than 3 times in a single chapter with the barest of changes! Gain a new skill? Copy and paste the entire stats again!) up until chapter 15 before the author got tired of doing that and resorted to using ChatGPT to write for them instead! Much story! Very content! Many effort!!

    This book has been deleted.
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords11mth
    Posted

    Immersive story with a good world setting. Entertaining combat scenes, recommended..

    altalt
    Legend of the Cursed Mage
    Fantasy · Shinji_Sama
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords1yr
    Commented

    This makes absolutely no sense. If the company was the one who fired you, they will need to give you severance pay. Unless you did something wrong which led to you being fired, it will not be 'seen as a negative mark' on your employment history. Otherwise, it can just be explained away in your job interviews. If you were to resign, you not only won't receive any severance pay, it would be even harder to explain in your future work as well. So no, deciding to quit instead of being fired is NOT a big brain move, in fact it's a really stupid decision. Either author really has no experience working in the real world or the companies they worked for are really screwed up for them to think this is normal.

    Ch 2 All Efforts Down The Drain
    altalt
    I Will Rise Back: Obtaining The Overcome System
    Urban · DL_Mondays
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords1yr
    Commented

    You're trying too hard to use big words to appear sophisticated that this looks really pretentious instead. It's like listening to a snobbish person ramble about a topic they have no expertise in and being insulted by them for not being as 'sophisticated' as they are. I'm not even going to comment on how abrupt the events are happening in this story either.

    Ch 2 Stitching
    altalt
    Afitera: Age of Darkness
    Fantasy · Gi_Nicole
    detail
  • Honestwords
    Honestwords1yr
    Replied to Hydra_Gairum

    Which really just translates to you spending more time getting people you know to leave inaccurate reviews of your book which do not reflect the actual state of your book. It really doesn't make this situation any better, you realise? Your reviews section is basically filled with unreliable reviews. Time that might be better spent editing the mistakes you have in your writing.

    This book has been deleted.