there IS A NEED TO DESIGN THE MAIN CHARECTER ABIT DEEPLY. while TEH AUTHOR IS AN EXOPERIENCED FELLOW, I WOULD LIKE TO SEE SOME MORE IN DEPTH FACTOR.

nice one

This is a nice build up for a story

It6 is noice

nice

update more frequently

I am going to stay with the story. waiting for the next story to come out

Give the story a try

A nice introduction. Let us hope that it would be as good as it is shown in the novel. I have high expectations from the writer.

Another dual character story from this writer. he is good at building the proper pathway.

good one

I have read another book of this author and just like that one, this novel seems to be progressing in a fairly good manner. i never expected the author to have such a varied perspective and the two characters who are supposed to be spearheading the story are well described. I hoe the author is able to continue the good work.

The plot line develops in a very unique way due to which the writer is bale to mix the individuals with a variety of satiations including betrayal and love. What I find interesting is the fact that the writer is avoiding some of the previously mentioned elements, but overall the plot is moving forward pretty well.

The story develops in a unique way where the writer is trying to create two personas who are going to attack each other in the future. This is a great way to develop a story and I believe that the writer would be able to make a good plot out of it.

I have read your novel abd fiound that the description of charecters and the plotline development is quite good. You have explained teh situation in detail and hence I have a positive outlook towards your work