If Dale could read minds, do he know who Neaveh is🤔

I can see now why Marcy rejected George. Marcy never really had any say in her life. I am very interested to see how this story unfolds. Who is George & what is his story? Him not having title, he can’t save her or can he 🤔. Does he have someone and did he accept her rejection?

Flow of the story is good. I am liking the characters so far. Work well done author!

Team Rhyes here….Damien is bringing feelings that Rhyes made her feel. His eyes, language , accent ….. resembles his br other

Even though Luwis made a mistake and acted on his feelings, I do not think he wanted to hurt anyone esp the one he love. I did not want him to die such a silly death

Dilly needs to get rid of this Rita! He doesn’t seem smart in his dealings with her.