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MissTurtle

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2022-04-04 JoinedPhilippines
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Posted

    First of all, as a first-time writer, this is a good start! The synopsis got me hooked. The storyline and plot are uniquely well made. Though there are some g-errors, it could be fixed. I hope to see more from this author.

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    Watch me tame the future mafia King!
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Replied to Asher_Trash
    Ch 1 Family Drama
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Replied to Softie_2001

    I know right?

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Replied to Aria_Estelle

    Thank you~

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Replied to Asher_Trash

    Thank you for your kind words!💕

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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Replied to Soleil_Lynx

    Omo, Your so kind!🥺

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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Replied to Softie_2001

    Thank you so much for your review!

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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Posted

    First of all, love the title! It immediately attracts the attention of readers. The plot is intriguing and the storyline is well made. I can't wait for the part where she regains her powers in her original world and meets the future mafia king just like what the author promised in the synopsis. Hoping to see more from this story!

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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Great start!

    Ch 1 PROLOGUE.
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Posted

    Love the story! From what I have read so far, I have to say that I am quite impressed. First of all, the narration is very good. Though there are some minor grammatical errors, they can be improved. I must say that the protagonist is very feisty and well accomplished which I love. The plot is also interesting. This is a 100% recommended story for those who like to read revenge stories.

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    My Revenge Story
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    That's sad...

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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    I love how unbothered she is 😂😂

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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Oh wow 😳🤣🤣

    Luna has been called by many names throughout his adventures; an alluring fox, sexy knight, handsome magician. He was even hailed as the number one most sought husband material to be back in his homeland. It was all praise and all that made Luna as he is now. But never in his life was he humiliated and embarrassed by being called a weirdo— and by a mere human?
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Another great chapter!

    Ch 5 CHAPTER 5: An Unusual Intruder.
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Hmm so fiesty~

    "Lovely my ass. What's your fucking business with me?"
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    HAHAHAHAHA

    "What the hell are you talking about?"
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Omg same thought HAHAHA

    'Just how the hell did this guy sneak in through the window of the fourth floor? Perhaps a robber? Is he perhaps from the psychiatric patient that got out by chance?'
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Great description🔥

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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Ch 1 CHAPTER 4: Amnesia Or Not?
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  • MissTurtle
    MissTurtle1yr
    Commented

    Someone's grumpy HAHAHAAHA

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