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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
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    The story is so good but the writing is ruining it for me. tonnes of spelling mistakes and incorrect grammar making it pretty hard to read. Hope the author proof read it. If not manually they could have used some apps to correct the errors

    Ch 47 My wife now!
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Replied to snehal_14

    it would have been better if they applied the same for the man too and just called him crown prince of Gazelle

    "Princess Cyrus, son of King Almen, accept the Princess of Suzania Kingdom as your wedded wife?" It was the rule to not utter the name of her lady and Cyrus felt a tinge of unhappiness resign.
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    wasn't it a wolf?

    Not Only that, Alice's worried expressions gave him a sight to see, where he then saw a bear lying behind all of them. 'So…she was attacked…'
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    she is plain dumb and stupid .if you know you will need help , why bother going there all alone

    "Please god….send any angel to save me..…" muttering this in her mind, Alice heard the thunder of the wolf that was running in her direction..where she was just a few seconds away from her death.
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    There are less errors in this chapter And sentences are more coherent . hope this continues

    Ch 36 Risk Favorite!
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    Proving again and again how dumb and stupid she is.

    "Neither do I expect any sympathy out of monsters like you? You only survive to drink blood out of people… once a bloody monster, always stays the one." Alice answered the same harshness, without minding if they will have any impact on the same person.
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    Crown Princess is the wife of Crown prince. So the title of Alice mentioned here is wrong. she is simply a princess

    "So is this true that she is the sole daughter of King Vilas?" Cyrus's eyes narrowed when he saw the man slightly shaking his head in agreement. "True. She is the sole daughter and the title of the Crowned Princess lies with ger."
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    i thought he had blonde hair based on the cover

    His face turned colder and kept on turning the aloof one until he ruffled his hands through his brown hair.
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    oh interesting . the misunderstanding is finally cleared

    Ch 13 Not your Bride!
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    a human is no match for a vampire . this girl is dumb

    'I Will disclose this vampire in front of the council..' If she was successful in doing so, the Vampire Lord will be ashamed to death!
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    looks like she has some secret powers. that's why the title witch queen

    Ch 4 Away from Vampires
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    His Witch Queen
    Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Replied to Hassy_101

    thanks for the clarification . yeah now it seems pretty ok since he was a kid himself back then . I am taking it as some kind of childhood crush.

    Ch 26 Different thoughts
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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
    History · Hassy_101
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Replied to liza_L

    family 's honour*

    The paper was the portrait of a little girl of about five years old with two ponytails. The child had a happy smile on her face as she stood on a tree, wearing a light pink and white hanfu dress.
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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    Really enjoying this story so far . However the part regarding the emperor wanting to marry her made me really uncomfortable . like if she didn't escape he would have kept a 5 year old child near him and wait until she grows up so that he can marry her ? I am not even talking abt the horrible things that happened to her family and i don't mind age gaps but the fact that he could have such thoughts abt a 5yo kid seemed really weird. Hopefully he is not the ml, if yes then i will probably not be able to continue the story because of that ick factor.

    Ch 26 Different thoughts
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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
    History · Hassy_101
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Replied to liza_L

    coveting*

    "No, teacher…" he turned to face the old man and shook his head with his hands behind his back. "... I shall find her and marry her."
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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
    History · Hassy_101
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Replied to Hassy_101

    So he killed her whole family 20 years ago. But still wanted to make that 5 year old girl as his empress and hence never married 😐.?

    About our empress, we are still searching for her. When we get her, she shall climb to the phoenix seat."
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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
    History · Hassy_101
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Replied to Hassy_101

    so he is way older than fml? since he ascended the throne 20 years ago

    "Your majesty, it has been twenty years since you succeeded the late emperor and you have been a great leader to the people. However, your majesty, every Kingdom needs an empress to help the majesty in running the affairs of the kingdom in regards to the women folks.
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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
    History · Hassy_101
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    i hope they don't die. cause how can the assan guild be the reason death of innocent people

    The cry of Innocence rang in the room, but none of the masters listened. Even though they knew that the servants were innocent, what of it? someone has to bear the brunt of the stick and servants are the best option.
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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
    History · Hassy_101
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    😖😖

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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
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  • liza_L
    liza_L1yr
    Commented

    grandma😭

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    The Assassin Empress; WBYP
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