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  • Atanti
    Atanti1yr
    Commented

    It is a wish fulfilment💀

    "Ddraig, personally I wouldn't let that slide," Albion comes in with the ultimate instigation line
    Down Bad for Gabriel (DXD)
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    Atanti1yr
    Commented

    “Oh yeah, make me” or it could be a questioning remark since it fits this AU personality of her

    "Oh, yea make me," the two replied in sync with the cockiness that radiated like the sun
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    Atanti1yr
    Commented

    Capitalization For some of ur characters saying something and to prolly remove all the , at the end of a “Example,” would be some improvement that could be done for the story?

    Ch 1 Beginning of the horny Angel lover
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    Atanti1yr
    Posted

    A recommendation from someone I know, but this story surprisngly for a wish fulfillment actually has great grammar that is readable. I hope for the Author to update this more and let us fans be Downbad along side him/her?

    Down Bad for Gabriel (DXD)
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    Atanti1yr
    Replied to Weird_Flex_but_ok

    Real

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    Down Bad for Gabriel (DXD)
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