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I really hope this book gets picked up and updated a lot more, because it is excellent so far. I love how the main lead skips the frivolous filler and gets straight to the point. I especially like how the straightforwardness of the main lead does not distract from the plot nor does it take away from the story or shorten it.
Although this novel is fairly good it would have been better as a series rather than a single book. There were so many plot lines and so many conspiracies, that were all resolved fairly decently, that it would’ve been much more enjoyable as a series. The different plot lines/conspiracies crossed over and ran into each other so many times that sometimes it became very difficult to read that let alone comprehend.
This novel’s premise and beginning had so much potential. The B-plot that was so unnecessary, very detailed, and lasted over 20 chapters. The conclusion/resolve felt extremely rushed and was just one chapter. The ending was extremely disappointing considering how the B-plot could’ve been shortened if not completely removed and replaced with a much more in-depth and satisfying conclusion/resolve.