The truth really seems to be painful at times. Well, considering that you said your FanFic can't compare to others... yeah, it's true. Maybe turning down the amount of 4rth wall breaks could make it improve since too much of it can really make a story not that immersive or exciting. Of course, deadpool is one of a kind so... yeah. Just do what you do.

Early chapters make me wanna drop due to the stupid decisions MC made in his past life. The MC is also sometime too lazy and always yawns all the time. Even Dino never yawned every second and he has the Sloth Ultimate Skill... anyways, this was also made to balance out the insane amount of 5-star spammers.

It's kinda unfair how even Female Lead FanFics have no #Action Tags despite not every novel having romance or something. WN sure is biased not to mention the fact that their Inkstone Website seems to be malfunctioning in the cover part.