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Nagisa_Akahoshi3dCommentedCh 26 Chapter 26- Nagisa_Akahoshi6dCommented
I'm ok with the story, but can the author please proofread each chapter before posting a chapter, you put the wrong word in the wrong places and always forget to capitalize the first word of a name or subject of importance so it seems to mix with the dialogue
Ch 3 World of curses - Nagisa_Akahoshi21dReplied to AziAntareAzaruth
I'm pretty sure ouroboros can be related to ophis from highschool DXD or the original myth of ouroboros itself
Yes, innocently. - Nagisa_Akahoshi1mthCommented
if I remember right, this line is from 7 deadly sins where ban continuously tries to drink the fountain of youth with Elaine repelling him each try
"A single lick will give me 10 more years of life... A sip will give me 100 more years of life. And if I drink it all, I will live forever." Whispering this with some happiness, Damian began to climb the tree without using magic. - Nagisa_Akahoshi1mthCommented
hggg
Link: https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/mp-stands-for-milk-points-danmachi-seikon-no-qwaser-si.9738/reader - Nagisa_Akahoshi1mthPosted
as someone who reads this book since the first 50 chapters. Author I'd like you to stop continuing these short chapters. while iIlove the frequent update, the quality and word count falls short compared to the previous chapters. And now there are at least 1 chapter per week, but compared to the past, it is 1/3 of a chapter and not complete compared to the first 50 chapters
- Nagisa_Akahoshi1mthReplied to Drknzz_333
that is ICW
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if i remember right this is from mahouka koukou no rettousei
[Heavy Metal Burst] - Nagisa_Akahoshi1mthCommentedCh 47 Reasons
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reminds me of the orv
[You are not looking at it from their perspective.] Musū Tengai spoke from within my soul. [You understand it as life and death in absolute terms. To them, it would be a new beginning. A new story can't start unless the current one ends. And many of them have grown tired of the current story.] - Nagisa_Akahoshi1mthCommented
this is either lily or Hermione
She entered the room and addressed the masked man sitting in the office, "Agent Athena, reporting for duty." - Nagisa_Akahoshi2mthPosted
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I'm imagining tatsuya from mahouka kokou no rettousei with his guns
Instead of answering Harry simply took something out of his jacket, pulled out the colt and fired it in less than a second. The moment he did, energy hummed through the air, and a beam of light, quick to the point of nearly being invisible, surged ahead. Following its path, a shower of iridescent particles left behind a fleeting trail of beauty, suggesting the complex, multi-dimensional nature of the attack. - Nagisa_Akahoshi2mthCommented
keep up the good work. although the pacing and word count are slow and short respectively, it makes up for it's quality
This book has been deleted. - Nagisa_Akahoshi2mthReplied to Nagisa_Akahoshi
for the KATEKYO HITMAN REBORN, it reminded me of zero point breakthrough
Along with that she has her own Unique brand of magic she has created, the Freezing White Flame. It basically creates pure white flames that she can easily wield in any way she desires. It is even capable of burning someone's soul. The flame itself is somewhat paradoxical, even though it looks like a flame it freezes the target. The only way I can think of to describe it is fire so cold it burns if that makes sense. - Nagisa_Akahoshi2mthCommented
I'm getting KATEKYO HITMAN REBORN vibes here. also a little bit of Ben 10, iIdont know the name of the alien but i remember one that is like a cross of butterfly and dragonfly that has a ultimate form of flaming ice breath
Along with that she has her own Unique brand of magic she has created, the Freezing White Flame. It basically creates pure white flames that she can easily wield in any way she desires. It is even capable of burning someone's soul. The flame itself is somewhat paradoxical, even though it looks like a flame it freezes the target. The only way I can think of to describe it is fire so cold it burns if that makes sense. - Nagisa_Akahoshi3mthCommented
I'll be honest, this is a good idea. but i will probably be not reading this again if this happens. I'm all in for a rollercoaster of drama and emotional moments, but if in the end of the arc you remove the author and still plan to continue the story. the story itself will lose meaning since it's "life with the author ", if it comes to that you will have to end the story short. though this kind of story will be good as a omake or side story series
This plot was erased because Marin was too good and wholesome to possibly turn bad. And Yuito was not that horrible, especially with his ability to read his own story. He will be aware of her feelings.