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I was a little ticked off when you went the kidnap route because that line is a dime a dozen in these stories . Luckily you redeemed yourself by her being able to get away and them having to leave her . I'm a bit intrigued by her eyes,and the fact that she could still see and smell them when even the wolves couldn't . Now I really want to know who her father is. I'm still hoping she gets a wolf though for her own peace of mind..
This part gets to me too. What did she get herself into All she did was accidentally fall asleep at her friend's house . Her phone was off because they were at the movies and she just didn't think to turn it back on since they were just hanging out . Also it's not like she's going to expect her family to be trying so desperately to reach her have they ever looked so hard for her before Probably not .So why would she expect it now ? She's a young college student hanging with her friends ,yet they make it sound like she's some little runaway delinquent type .It's really annoying .