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Al_Roxas

Al_Roxas

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2022-03-26 JoinedGlobal
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
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    The writing quality and story development was great and keeps the reader glued to their seats. I like the way how it was developed without too much repetitiveness. It was exciting to read the stories and hoping to have more to come.

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    Assassin's Daughter
    Fantasy · Jessica Nolan
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
    Commented

    The last part was repeated again. I wouldnt normallg mention it since the earlier ones where a short part. But it seems it's being repeated and the things repeated are increasing. Hope you can avoid this.

    Ch 85 85
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    Billionaire Daughter's Nanny
    Urban · Goldie_01
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
    Commented

    The whole chapter 61 is a repeat from chapter 60

    Ch 61 61
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    Billionaire Daughter's Nanny
    Urban · Goldie_01
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
    Commented

    starting from Marienne POV, it is a repeat from earlier chapter 59. ☹️

    Ch 60 60
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    Billionaire Daughter's Nanny
    Urban · Goldie_01
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
    Commented

    almost ¼ of the story was repeated again. This also happened in the previous chapter. Is this trying to make the story longer?

    Ch 46 46
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    Billionaire Daughter's Nanny
    Urban · Goldie_01
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
    Commented

    more chapters to read

    Ch 5 Chapter 4
    altalt
    Assassin's Daughter
    Fantasy · Jessica Nolan
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
    Commented

    more xp

    Ch 9 Enemy of a Past Life
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    Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator
    Urban · Ten Miles Sword God
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  • Al_Roxas
    Al_Roxas1yr
    Commented

    cool to have nice friends with same mindset

    Ch 111 Chapter 111
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    Never Judge
    Realistic · wounded_warrior
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