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Actually i liked Alphonso's reaction i think it will be an important change in events that will make the MC mentality grow, he sure have a genus mind from two lives but they all were devoted to magic, that's why i really liked Alphonso's action, yes he was his mentor but he will never now what goes inside the little kid mind, so blamind him for the MC's action i don't think it as a right decision. Thank you for a woderful chapter, i hope what come is even better.
Until the 17 chapter it's really amazing, you can feel the laws and the theories behind his explanations, truly the author put effort in making the magic concept. I just have some points. I know Jared loves magic like crazy and all but he has less conversations, interactions and feelings for the other characters beside the main topic which is magic, but if he could show some feelings or reactions i think it will be better for his mother at least. Once again it is really amazing an thank you, i hope the chapters come quick.