The errors in punctuation, upper/lower case, and gender pronouns make it a bit confusing.

Author has good ideas but the sentences are phrased as if they were translated into English. I think I understand what the Author is trying to convey. Hoping the next chapters are interesting.

Story is getting interesting. Can’t wait to read more.

Until this chapter, I thought that this part of the story was set in New York. Now I am confused as the author referred to the States.

This is interesting and well-written.

Plot is good but text is lost in translation. The grammatical errors are a lot.

This story is a bit hard to understand. The author seems to leave out words in sentences and also gets the tenses mixed up.

The author has done well with portraying sincerity and integrity. There are a few minor typos here and there but the story is well written so far.

The description of the food makes you want to eat dessert with them. Tiramisu!

The best part of this chapter is the poem of self-affirmations from the mother.

Plot is interesting. The lack of proper punctuation and run-on sentences make me wonder if the author is in a hurry.

That was a fun example of actions having consequences. Karma!

Sibling bond! Unusual but nice to see a brother being protected by his sister. I’m looking forward to reading further.

l find the plot getting more and more interesting with each chapter.

Interesting story. A very capable female lead. Can’t wait to read more.

Word is “awful”.

I keep coming back to this novel. The story has been getting better as it progressed. Past tense in English is a bit tricky to learn and use appropriately. Wishing Emo all the best!

This author has a gift with words!

I miss the author’s little notes that made this story fun to read.

Typos with the name, pronouns occasionally mixed up. It’s got me confused.