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Why are you ruining the novel by changing the meaning of sentences just because you thought that translating names is "lost in translation"????? I believe everyone who's reading this novel knows that chinese names and surnames actually mean something. This leaves a bitter taste in my mouth, and its already a second time in the recent chapters.... This is so stupid...
Ehm, the leading hints were just too obvious that I was expecting a plot twist. The hints should be subtle enough that they would fit in place like a puzzle after a reread, but not obvious where it would start feeling like a bait for readers. For amazing examples for how to have traitors with hints leading up to the reveal that would blow readers minds after the fact, I'd recommend reading Reverend Insanity. Imo its much better written than this novel.
Wang Lin got nothing on Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. That guy would kill everyone, including his family or "friends" without batting an eye just to achieve his goals. He even had his brother be rap ed by a giant monkey woman for days on straight...