To those who love advanced worldbuilding, cross-country adventures, and multiple races and clans, this is the story for you. Be warned, however, as This story does get pretty dark at times, with extremely gruesome and horrific deaths, in surprising and unique ways. Ultimately, I hope to provide something for everyone, especially if you like fantasy.

This story has excellent world-building and is very good at delivering suspenseful moments. The story is very good at establishing intrigue and maintaining it through small glimpses at the world's true lore. I definitely recommend this story.

This story starts with an almost dream-like feeling to it, and even as its story changes tone it flows well through the transitions and almost seems to give you a surreal feeling. It's very well written and well thought out.

This story really captures that, true villain, madness with a side of backstory vibe. It's great at delivering stunning moments with epically described visuals. Would recommend.

this novel has a unique theme and storytelling method and this combined with the well-written descriptions makes it both eerie and captivating. Very excited to see where it goes.

This story is full of exceptional vocabulary and has a number of exciting elements that it plays around with. It has really good storytelling and the descriptions are very in-depth and bone-chilling in all the best ways. Looking forward to more.

Hmm... world? That's a good name. Namer went with Big Round Thing instead.

No it does not

This story has a good amount of tension and drama, mixed with well-defined characters and story. I can't wait to see where it goes.

It is an excellent start to an interesting story. The writing style is unique which is not something you often see in modern works. This new style brings an interesting feeling of freshness to this story which I feel adds to the story's uniqueness. All in all, excellent start, aside from a few grammar mistakes, and I can't wait to see where it goes

Hello, Airlos here with a little bit more information. Here is a basic map of Erristas with the countries and locations. A more detailed map is currently being made as well as country maps for the individual countries. I hope this gives you a better idea of where the story takes place!😁

Yes... death, an appropriate start to any story.

This story is one of those stories that has been thought through to the end from the beginning it involves secret societies, ancient cults, and powerful prophacys. The characters are constantly put into situations where the best choice isn't always good and they must decide where to draw the line between good and evil. This story can also get fairly dark and gory so it is good to be weary. All in all, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it.

The story and characters are really well put together and the development of the ideas presented has good pacing and depth. The ideas and power structures are unique and engaging and after reading the first five chapters I am already hooked in. Can't wait to read the rest!

Really cool, I'll bet the father is the MV

Quite the dark beginning, I can't wait to see where it goes.