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RazorReptile2yrPostedIf you’re looking at reviews deciding whether you should read this novel, well let me tell you, Read it! Atleast the first chapter, because I know you’ll read the rest as well. UnknownKing has great descriptive writing for scenes, like when people are crying or when hes writing about huge scenes like a village. While the writing is descriptive it’s not too much, he doesn’t dwell on subjects that are not important. This novel is worth the read and is a good way to waste time, it has unique characters and is developing an interesting story.
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Slow or fast
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Wasn’t it gab that lied
When he whipped his head around to look away from his burnt home, he pointed at Luz and shouted angrily: "You… You lied to me." - RazorReptile2yrCommented
Foreshadowing
Gritting his teeth, he rasped in a rough voice, not minding the tears that silently slid down his ashy cheeks: "You… You better wait. You took everything from me… One day… One day… I swear I'll come back and take my revenge for all the misery you caused today." - RazorReptile2yrCommented
Cry baby 😭 lol
He remained still, not daring to say another word as his eyes were glued to the horrors around them. His own face was stained black with dark ash, veins left behind by wet tears littered his cheeks. There was only a hint of his skin peeking through the gushing rivers streaming from his eyes. - RazorReptile2yrCommented
That’s rough buddy
This paragraph has been deleted. - RazorReptile2yrCommentedCh 29 New Home
- RazorReptile2yrCommentedCh 28 A New Land
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Sword
I begin running towards the King, putting all the power into my legs. I channel aura into my sword and use magic missile magic with it. I bring up my shield slightly, and I slam the sword down on the ent's arm, causing it to blow off. - RazorReptile2yrCommentedCh 10 Tournament Battle
- RazorReptile2yrCommentedCh 26 The King
- RazorReptile2yrCommentedCh 25 Quest To Death
- RazorReptile2yrCommentedCh 23 Learning it all
- RazorReptile2yrCommentedCh 22 Remembrance
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I hope this isn’t foreshadowing
"I love you, Luck. I hope you stay by my side forever… So we can defeat this world and become strong enough to find our place together." - RazorReptile2yrCommented
Thats a bad orphanage
My life on Earth was boring and cold. I was alone, unable to spend time with anyone, and anytime I tried to, I was ostracized for being an orphan. People would say I was bad luck because not even an orphanage would let me live with them, yet somehow I still managed to live in a mid-tiered district in an abandoned building that still had water and power.