It’s going to be interesting to see what Vanessa comes up with next.

Vanessa you go girl. Don’t let them bully you take charge and show them who’s boss and play dirty if you have to.

I agree

Will Tim be shocked to see her pictures. Will he stop at nothing to get the love of his life and his only son back. Will Sam’s memo ry return?

Good for her the guy is a pompous little roach who needs to be squashed under the toe of her shoe and ground into the dirt.

The little brat would be turned over my knee and have his bottom paddled until he couldn’t sit down for a week.

Keep it up you are doing just fine.

Instead of that took the sail’s out of her winds perhaps you could say That took the wind out of her sails.

Then why d you do it in the first place? Why are men always to stupid to realize that they screw up until they actually do so.

I am confused why is the man following her? Is he trying to scare her to see what she will do so that her new employer knows how she will react in a given situation or what?

The writer needs to make up their mind on wether the main character has a male or female sibling.

This young lady is headed for trouble.