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Beat_Man1mthCommentedWriting* (I really enjoy Writing)
Don't worry, I'm not dropping this. I really enjoyed riding so I don't know when but the book will be on put on hold for the moment. I apologize for not letting you all know before I was kind of angry, didn't really wanna talk to anybody so yeah, this is just a update on the situation.- Beat_Man1mthReplied to Daoist92VPav
I understand, I will try
Also how did you like the way I made Tsunade as an sub, I feel like it fits her character better, at least compared to Mommy Yuzuriha who definitely is not a Submissive woman. - Beat_Man1mthReplied to Fu_Hua_
- Beat_Man1mthReplied to jeanpierregerardo
Honestly, I just put it in the chapter just as a build up, so if you where bored about the romance with Tsunade and Yuzuriha then my bad, don’t worry though you won’t see much of it later on, and it won’t be the main part of the chapters later on. Like next chapter for example, the MC’s mother and Tsunade’s relationship only get brought up in the beginning, afterwards it gets back on track with the story. Although I agree it could have been a side story but whatever, it is what it is.
Ch 8 ) Academy part 2 (R18) - Beat_Man1mthCommented
Chapter 8, skeleton form:
Sir. Berthelot: - Beat_Man1mthReplied to Daoist92VPav
I agree with you, it will be weird if I do it as expected, but I’m going to make this more interesting with extra spicy drama. But that will be like far later in the story…. But maybe sooner then expected….
Also how did you like the way I made Tsunade as an sub, I feel like it fits her character better, at least compared to Mommy Yuzuriha who definitely is not a Submissive woman. - Beat_Man1mthReplied to Daoist92VPav"I don't think I will, you see I never once had any experience, but I did hear from some colleagues that sex with men is not that pleasant. Since all they care about is their own pleasure, while completely forgetting about their partners after they had finish once or twice." I spoke without thinking as I told her one of my secrets that nobody else knew. Which I didn't catch, until she repeated what I said, with a tone of astonishment and surprise.
- Beat_Man1mthReplied to Daoist_sword_edge
Yea my bad on that one, when I first started writing this I was inspired by other books and in one of them I saw them using the love hearts. So I saw it as unique and wanted to try it, but after getting multiple people to complain about them made me reconsider, but don’t worry the hearts are only in the first chapter and I will edit it out soon, thanks for the review.
- Beat_Man1mthCommented
I made this, don’t know if it loaded last time.
(Sir. Berthelot skeleton IMG) - Beat_Man1mthCommented
Not mine found on google.
(🔥Tsunade nightgown, IMG) - Beat_Man1mthCommented
Not mine found on google.
(🔥Tsunade nightgown, IMG) - Beat_Man1mthCommented
Made with Ai
(🔥Sexy Yuzuriha IMG) - Beat_Man1mthCommented
Made with AI, let me know if you can’t see this.
(🔥Sexy Yuzuriha IMG) - Beat_Man1mthReplied to Rakshahsa
Good idea, was going to do something with it when she unlocks more templates. Like maybe some Manhwa bloodlines, ???
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Chapter 7+
MC's aunty (Tsunade Senju): - Beat_Man1mthReplied to Beat_Man
Long*, god Dam it…..
(Claymore form(huge) IMG) - Beat_Man1mthReplied to cabooseiscool_1
Good catch
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I made this, pretty proud of it.
(Elora's Shikai form) - Beat_Man1mthCommented
Didn’t make this ( also this claymore is more then twice the size of The current MC, it’s almost 2 meters tall) (<—— metric system)
(Claymore form(huge) IMG)