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pedro_gonzo

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2022-03-15 JoinedUnited States
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    pedro_gonzo1yr
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    There are a lot of messed up lines..are they supposed to be in there??? chapters apprears to be really messed...NOT happy!

    Ch 195 I Didn't Expect Them To Be So...
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    Guardian Of The End
    Fantasy · BlackFlamer
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    pedro_gonzo1yr
    Commented

    I did not receive my second chapeter

    Ch 62 Mysterious Adult
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    Online In Another World
    Fantasy · DelzGB
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  • pedro_gonzo
    pedro_gonzo1yr
    Commented

    You may want to rethink the structure of the first sentence; it should either be "if you want my help or if you want me to help you" something like that

    "That is why if you want to help me," Jason added in a businessman tone. "There are a few things that you will have to give.
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    Guardian Of The End
    Fantasy · BlackFlamer
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