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love your work, read four of them love it all even the unfinished one(madam your personna has collapsed). Hope all is good in your world and that hopefully you can finish that story too. I'm looking to see if I can find more of your stories because I love your writing, your characters, and the storyline are always awesome!! I enjoyed them all!!!
I know this is an old story from 3 yrz ago, reading the comments but it doesn't matter, I'm a fan of this author, love your work, your stories are beautifu, love all the characters, the humor and all. Beautifully written, beautiful translation, a few mistakes, but nothing serious!!! Again love your work beautiful ending!!! I read a few of your work and by far you're my favorite author!!!
I enjoyed the story. It was good in all aspects. Eventhough the last 2 chapters was the same it's still okay, because it was just a flashback when the FL sons were 10 yrs old. Although the chapters cut off im still satisfied because compared to some other stories that was abruptly cut off when the story was developing thus one was basically finished. The ML and FL are still together, their kids are adults and it's a happy ending!!!
Again I'm confused, I thought Robinson was a male, because of the name Robinson and also the author refers to him as a he, although sometimes you refer to him as a she or her but now in this chapter she's choosing a dress to wear? So can you clarify if this character is a maleor female? your writing doesn't clarify and the name Robinson is a male name.
it's a good story line but my main complaint is the authors keeps switching the FL name from Daisy to Brown Olivia and to Lucia Everleigh? it is very confusing!!! in the beginning I had to go back and re read the chapters because I thought the author was talking about other female characters. it is very confusing!! even the male lead, in the same scenario , jumps from Arthur North and Kevin! Can you please stick to one name even if these are her hidden identities please use the name when she assuming that identity not when she's in a conversation with someone her name changes from Daisy Zane to Brown Olivia to LuciaEverleigh. It is a great story and I love it but this really affects the awesome storyline!
it's very confusing when you refer to the main characters as he when she's a female a d then the lead male appears and you refer to him as she. this just makes the story hard to read
I like it especially the fact that the author did have an ending!! I was worried that because it has only 160 chapters compared to other stories, I thought it wasgonna another abandoned novel without an ending!! For that I thank you author I like that it's a good story and it doesn't drag on. Nice short and sweet!! it does have a few loose ends but doesn't matter the main characters story is more important. Good job!!!
"they didn't have a way to mastubate.." a 2 yr old can say that!? do you know what mastubate mean? I know this is being translated but do make sure you understand all the meanings of some words so it doesn't come off as really inappropriate!!! and make the story lose its validation
It's such a shame how these authors just abruptly end the stories leaving again unhappy people who have spend so much money buying chapters!! luckily for me I skipped to the end to see and found out before I spend too much!! I got burned before just like this so I've learnt to check the ending first before wasting money!!! it's too bad because it is such a good, well written story and excellent translation!!!
just wondering why the chapter says 10 million and she sold it for 10 million but it's 2 million. it's not about money it's about the story, was it a typo? I know it's a translation novel, but doesn't anyone proofread before releasing it???and yes English is probably your second or third language but it's also mine and that was an easy typo to fix