I don't understand why you changed the story, even if Rosalie were the love interest, couldn't you make the story from the canon? I mean, you can do something to make her fall for mc, create some problems with emmet. That would be much more interesting than forcing the plot and leaving it so easy and insipid.

Drop, i hate the mcs who give or offert his skills like nothing, stupid beta simp...

But what are you saying, you don't even see what you write? What does it matter if it's been a year or not since the MC obtained his power? The fact is that you showed that the MC had enormous strength in just 10 days, his growth should be much greater but that is clearly not reflected in this chapter. What's more, it seems too ridiculous to me that the MC ended up even using his zampakuto and releasing shikai. Simply using his physical power was more than enough but you made it even more absurd and meaningless.

Pathetic coward... Drop it...

How I hate these types of stories where they give the mc a lot of skills and op skills but somehow they never manage to work the way they should. It was that he would have defeated Tobirama a while ago but coincidentally the supposed experience and dodging by instinct, and forced and stupid things like that always intervene in some stupid way.

Madara isnt so talkative

Only then did he lose without explanation, but what a fool's errand for the authors to make nerfed or useless characters. I better leave it here before I continue seeing more nonsense... Really Gilgamesh losing against a Naruto child hahaha how pathetic

But what does it mean that it is also a consideration? Why does he need that? And I don't understand the meaning of the word consideration here, I mean he needs to be considerate while others flirt with his mother?

Drop it.... 🤦🤦🤦

🤦🤦🤦🤦The flying thunder is a teleportation technique but even he has a better technique than that and yet you tell me that he was hit as if nothing had happened by the others and then having an advantage of hundreds of meters, that even without having an advantage anymore would it be almost impossible to achieve??? I have never read a story as meaningless as this one, Chinese logic always really surprises me.

🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦What a stupid story, no logic....

Before he had killed 10 genin, now with all that training he went through and all those strength increases he had that was much greater than before, he says that before 20 genin he will retire? His strength seems to regress with training or the author does not know how to reflect the increases in power...

I don't understand, you gave him high statistics but it has the same uselessness as if he didn't have them... I also don't understand how it is difficult for him to keep up with his statistics as much as if he didn't. In other words, to recover, you need to go through that process as if you had never learned anything, as if what you learned resided solely in your memory. It should be much easier and faster to recover, because your body already contains it. That's why I find it too incongruous that Yamato is progressing faster. I don't understand your reason for making such a useless MC but putting him in the guise of one who isn't. Furthermore, Yamato does not have that talent that you say, Hiruzen is more talented and not to mention that he should progress much faster because he already has the statistics in his body.

An average mc like this is the same thing you suggested about a weak mc fighting for every fragment of power...

Oh a useless and weak mc, step...

Updates??

Good chapter and translaction, thanks...

Why does he have to teach his successor? The beauty of the fic and the premise is the uniqueness of the character, not even his successor should have any of that. Also, everything that involves Qi is its unique factor, not just harmony as you say, so since he started teaching Tsunade about it he already bored me. That type of mouthy character with hero complexes is very stressful.

It sucks when the character loses the unique factor they have... The funny thing was him using something different from the others, I don't understand why authors use that cliche of extending what the character has, if that makes it lose originality. One of the worst clichés there is....

What needs to be answered here to finish the matter is what the author offers and not the consumer's preferences, because then when talking about it one could say what is discordant here, if it is someone who is asking for an OP MC in a fic where the author established a premise of a weak MC with only hard work ahead of him or if instead someone asks for a weak MC in a fic where the premise is a character with great potential, a genius who started with a high bar. In Naruto, we were established with the premise of an MC with a weak beginning as you say and who actually had great hidden power but is nevertheless very different from a character like Itachi who was established as a genius from the beginning, someone with great potential which is not hidden to the point of making him a weak or very powerless character. In this case, the author of the fic made these points more from the beginning, Itachi has been represented as an MC with great potential, that is why this image must be realized with results, a kenpachi using only a small part of his power is something which should be yes or yes among Itachi's possibilities at this point. And as I said, I'm not saying that he has to beat everyone now, but he does have to overcome these obstacles, which in the long run are nothing compared to the future levels, including Kenpachi himself. All this in order for power to be consistent with his image of great talent and with what is expected of him in the future. What I don't understand is why the idea is not captured that it was only a small part of this kenpachi's power without the name of his zampakuto, it is really very infuriating and disappointing. In any case, no story is perfect, there are many things that can disappoint you, the author can make mistakes or the viewer can perceive something in a bad way. Even so, I already planned to continue with the story even if that part dissapoints me, I will only leavit when it becomes a repetitive patterns. Also thanks for the debate, it was valuable for me.