Just finished reading chapter 16 and am all caught up, figured now would be a good time to review. The novel has promise, the writing is great, the grammar and punctuation are above average for the common novel on WN. It’s a good read and sometimes the pacing fluctuates between being a slow read and a fast read. Definitely recommend!

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Honestly one of the best written ff on the site. Story is kinda slow but it’s worth it if you ask me. The realism mixed with the innocence of Pokémon is done extremely well! Would love more!

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Omg I love Fluffles!!! She is such a cute MC and she acts just as you would think a cat playing a game would! She’s so good at the game!! She’s also so bad at it!

Omg such a beautiful novel! I love how the author explains the worlds that Heon is in. Such a great novel, please post more! We need more!

I normally don’t read novels like this but my boyfriend told me to read this one and I’m glad I listened to him! Harly does an excellent job painting the world around you and I couldn’t put my phone down until I read everything!! Everyone needs to read this book!

Omgahhhh I love this story sooo much!!!! Everyone is so perfectly written and I want more chapters!!!! Pwetty pwease Author-Sama!!!! Give me moreeeeee!!!!