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There aren't any problems with the grammar. The storyline and character are interesting. This could end well if you actually plan on completing the novel. Keep the chapters comin!

How do? Which part of it is similar; forgive me for asking but, it’s been a while since I read Warlock of the Magus world.

Pretty good I guess. It would be great if the guy gets more martial techniques and creates his own martial technique for his cockroach martial art prowess.