Francine_Zane
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I'm aware of what it looks like, but I'm guessing you aren't going to see a lot of people wearing one to a school. I could be wrong. Either way, it stood out to me as a bit much.
Color me envious. I have to admit, your first few chapters were a bit rough. The storytelling far outweighed the technical ability, but the farther the story progresses, the better the writing. Congrats. a lot of writers don't improve so quickly.
What can I say? I started reading and couldn't stop until I ran out of story. The female MC is the kind of person we should all have in our lives. Her ability to make such a remarkable difference in the Ji family was touching. The fact the family needed her so badly goes to prove that rich doesn't always mean wealthy in the ways that really matter.
Kind of getting tired of being reminded of her background by now. It has been beaten into me. Aside from that, still loving the story. Thank you for sharing.
I've decided I don't want to be her friend! :)
It would be nice to know the ages of the people if it can be worked in somewhere.
So she actually went to the school in her wedding dress? That sounds a little off, but I suppose if it were simple enough it could work.
Be nice to get a visual of what he considers vulgar.
Vicious