for a second i thought these noises were somthing else

well author you were right. It was a s**t plot. but readable.. let's see if he enters more toxic relationships or not.. .. 😄

author gave her very conflicting personality. one moment she is silent and good, in the other she is a toxic person... 😴😴

hmm I don't think a person like that would break the relationship over a late gift 🤔

*entire toxic relationship you mean 😅😅

he already sounds like a virgin 😂

oh that makes sense

it's like a child writing stuff. the story is good, but try reading some popular novel and compare..

one more and i will let myself out

oh boy, now you are overdoing with these sounds.. .just mention in the sentence that's better writing.

Name someone fredo and kill him haha