I’ll take this feedback to improve on this concept. Thanks for your review!

Great start to a great novel. Having the author giving snarky viewpoints about one of the characters was pretty funny. Great start so far, it’ll take me a while to catch up tho😅

Mr Magrave huh?

It means “master thy flame, let it consume thee”. Then boom cool different color flame!

Hope you guys enjoy the novel! I’ll be updating this joint 5-6 days a week! Love to you all! Stay blessed fellow readers and writers!❤️

I think this person likes the novel, I don’t know tho🗿

“The flames shall consume you, B O Y”

Really decent so far. I do wish that the chapters were longer, but I do want to know more about the Nebulas and the lesser beings! Hopefully the author can get more in depth about them in future chapters.

*insert solo leveling anime ending song*

Wake up Nebula, we got a world to destroy!

*insert Solo Leveling anime opening* Decent start so far, I do like how the author got straight into the action and kept the introduction of the creator chick short and sweet Does kind of feel like an anime tho.

Surely nothing bad will happen, riiiiight?!!

Shorts kings👑 After fixing a few typos another chill chapter

Try and edit this typo when you get the chance

W chapter as always from the author

8/10 so far. I did love how I was able to have an image of what was going on. The battle between brothers mirroring the battle of ying and Yang? And how he was bested by his younger brothers plot armor (pretty much) was shown very well! If this was your first try at this, keep going! This is a banger so far

Veldona is very unhinged. The MC being constantly perplexed is a great touch to this story.

Well that was one of the chapters of all time

Honestly deserved

Brotha man turned into thermal Godzilla