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Ebrish10dCommented'Reverend Insanity'
A masterpiece beyond my wildest dreams...- Ebrish21dCommentedWhen fully concentrating their energy, they are able to go into another form where their form inverts and their skin color goes fully white, growing their hair. The veins on the body turn a purplish-black. This form is called [Meteoric Burst]. A form that allows them to push past the limit of flesh and blood.
- Ebrish21dCommentedI started with the body. Light blue skin. His face, by human standards, was beyond handsome, but instead of having two eyes, he was a cyclops with one blue eye in the center of his face. Another single eye is right below the pectoral muscles.
- Ebrish1mthCommented
Imagine each shadow clone performing mihawk level swordsmanship.
He had also learned a lot of other useful jutsu like Transformation Jutsu, Body Flicker Jutsu, Shadow Clone Jutsu, etc. from the scrolls left by his parents. - Ebrish3mthCommented
THE CHAIN MUST NOT BE BROKEN
He reached down to check if his balls were still there and they were. - Ebrish3mthCommented
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... - Ebrish3mthCommented"It's just for a while as I feed him the formula. It's fine. Do you want to hold him, Toji?"
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Theres also izanagi and izanami
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Also a chance to learn from hashrama, tobirama, learn seals from mito and get acquainted with tsunade and learn from her. But it depends on the time you are born.
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I would rather choose from nara, yamanaka or akimichi clan. They have good clan techniques, have good reputation in the village, have high position in the village and will have very good relationship with the other two clans. Also a possibility to get a chance to learn the clan technique of the other two clans.
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Uzumaki - very high chakra reserves + chance to get chance to obtain kaguya eye heart thing/ the sealing chains/ ability to heal others with a bite, if born before the villages destruction then a chance to learn the best sealing technique from the best sealing masters in the world but theres the impending loom of the attack, if born after the villages destruction chance of getting sold on black market or used by other villages to seal tailed beast or be used like karin
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Hyuga - byakugan ( can be upgraded to tenseigan) but cursed seal, even if you dont get it your future children or grand children might be subjected to it
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Senju - strong body with high chakra with higher regenerative power, good reputation with villagers, but higherups and other villages will try to kill you so that another hashirama or tobirama wont exist , will be targeted to be experimented upon
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Uchiha- get sharingan but would have to go through emotional trauma + higher ups will try to kill you + will be sent to frontline during wars +even if you get to mangekyo sharingan will have to take the eyes of your sibling which should also be a mangekyo
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Did he get his zanpakuto or not?
I haven't graduated from the Shin'o Academy yet. If I did that, I would be forced to join a squad, which will definitely be Squad 6 and I will lose all of this free time I have to train. So I won't do that yet. I'll continue practising Kido in the lessons and appear to be struggling, while I increase my own training. I am in my second year of the Academy and training. I was forced to increase the gravity from 6x to 7x at the end of the first month. I am starting to feel the strain on my body. - Ebrish4mthCommented
Whats the name?
So to satiate my need for excitement, I thought it appropriate to begin my Haki training. Not Haoshoku or Busoshoku Haki of course. No Kenbunshoku or Observation Haki. I've seen it in other fanfics before. I think there was even one where the MC began training his Haki before being born ... yeah ... - Ebrish4mthCommented
Good choice author
#3 Flashy Flash - Ebrish4mthCommented
Mihawks swordplay combined with Byakuyas zanpakuto ability, good choice. Imagine each petal with Mihawks level of swordplay + haki( armanent and conquerors) + Reiatsu
"I would like to get Dracule Mihawk's template ..." - Ebrish5mthCommented
Few suggestions, dont make the mc too reliant on the system and have him learn some stuff like rasengan and kirin on his own and save points for other jutsus. Also be more creative like fire, fire and air , water and lightning style etc combos of rasengan, and upgrade useful jutsus after mastering them like upgrade the raikages technique to s rank after understanding how susanoo works or fuse it with susanoo. Just go wlid.
Also leave some comments on what i can add. Im not omniscient. Comments and reviews on what i can add what i woud like to see.