shootingstar27
Hi , everyone I'm your Author Mae . I'm 16 yrs old and will soon be a writer.
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this is my honest review the flow of the story is good, every chapter is long and that is a good thing .however there are some errors and some of it are really confusing especially when you expressed the MC life. So I hope you would be more careful on expressing the MC life that is clear and interesting.
One thing that I like about this novel is, Is how you deliver what the MC doing, and thinking and also how you deliver it as a narrator. every chapter is long and it's a good thing also every title of your chapters literally would make the readers curious and excited to read more of it. to be honest it is my first time reading about a transmigration novel about modern sports. it feels unique and new to me.
I really like sci-fi stories and your novel is very interesting, it has a nice plot ,and a well written story ,I hope you can update more chapters to promote your novel❤️☺️