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Astral_Void

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Occupation : Student Hobby : Reading Anime's and Fanfiction Favorite : Tensura (TTIGRAAS)

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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void4mth
    Replied to The_Zen_Boy

    don't worry, everything will be explained within the upcoming chapters[that are already uploaded] ;) So please read the story till the end UmU

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : Getting Stronger
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    I didn't even notice bruh

    A.N/ 1947 words, and wait a minute, is that... A full chapter without a single note? Yup! I'm as surprised as you are tbh.
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    For some reason, I'm imagining this as that discussion between two AI robots that got popular for becoming "too deep"

    Partner: "Nice to meet you as well, Unique Skill: [Great Sage]. And the answer is simple: One of my abilities allows my Master to acquire and share part of her skills, or at least some of their effect if they were unique ones, with her partner, your Master.
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Indeed. If you find a cared one in trouble. And you want to help them, but you know that if you don't, they will come back stronger, and if you do help them, they will remain the way they are, "weak", than it's better to do the prior. Because although difficult, it's bette to let them become stronger, because than they wouldn't suffer any longer even if you're not there, but if you chose the latter, you'll have to protect them all the time, and that is just not possible, there's bound to be flaws and gaps from where one can feel the suffering, and who knows that the suffering would be the same or stronger than before...

    Luminous: "In that situation, I would let them face and go through whatever it is. It might be painful for them, but since they will come back better than before, it's definitely worth it."
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Ah, so it was Shion's death, not luminous' death?

    Rimuru: "If your citizens... No. If someone you cared about was going to face something difficult, something painful, but they were going to get out of it stronger than before. But you can stop it, and make them not go through it, what would you do?"
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    My theory: He saw her die "D-Dea", if added with a "TH" at the end, would be "Death". I don't see any word forming other than this with the exact starting letters FOR THIS CONTEXT...

    Rimuru: "I... You... I saw you... D-Dea-daringly hugging me. hahaha..."
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Rimuru-sama is the type of person with such a face[and body] to make even actual lesbians fall for him[because he looks female enough to someone who doesn't know he's a male inside]

    Luminous: "Ara~ Aren't you flirtatious? But I have to say, your flowing hair under the moon's light, and your golden eyes and beautiful face are quite gorgeous in this type of scenery as well~"
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    wait... now that I think about it, isn't Oroborus eating his own specie[snakes]...?

    While setting on my chair, Rimuru put Lettage on our plates before putting the snake meat slices atop it with some of the Garlion at its side. He then sprinkled over them Hipukute spice and a piece of butter, completing the meal.
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    "meat out of the pot"

    Luminous: "Don't worry little guy, Rimuru will be with you, we just need to get the meat out of the pot and you'll be back with him, though it saddens me that you don't like me as much."
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Replied to WeAreBlank
    Luminous: {Hmhmhm~ (this is a laugh) Yes, I very much am~ Now, I want you to give me a big piece of meat, don't cut it or anything, I will do everything myself}
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented
    Luminous: {Hmhmhm~ (this is a laugh) Yes, I very much am~ Now, I want you to give me a big piece of meat, don't cut it or anything, I will do everything myself}
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Na It's pretty good, it actually shows the ACTUAL emotional breakdowns, and the romance is well phased too compared to MOST tensura fics. I won't say this is best, but it's still in that top 1 percent of tensura fics... Most fics just end the romance development in 2 to 3 chapters, and even that with no real showing of emotion. I'd say this is a 4.5 stars[I'm just being picky because I read SOME better fics, but meh, if not for me being picky, this is 5 stars] romance wise, with the stardards of TenSura fics

    Does the romance feel rushed now? I lost control of the romance in chapter 10 and I have no clue what's going on myself.
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    I just realized, but both are holding themselves off with the excuse of having the dignity of a King/Queen. So this lyrics fits here perfectly: Oh If all of the Kings... Had their Queens on the throne...~ We would pop champaign and raise~-a~ toast~

    Luminous: "No! I must hold myself! I am a goddamn queen! I won't just fall to my desires!"
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Yes. And I think it was less than 500. But I think adding the 150,000 orcs part would be more funnier

    Rimuru: "Hahaha, yeah. It happened two times before when I named the goblins and another time when I named the orcs" (he did pass out when he was naming the 500 new goblins, right?)
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Eh? I think he should be a lot more stronger[just from his skills, he's stronger than post-orc disaster Rimuru, who could name 150,000 orc monsters... even if the "quality" this time was higher... oh well, I'll just take it was PLOT

    "Notice: Magicule level is critically low. Initiating sleep mood for recovery"
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    *Nullification should be that much at this level

    Extra skill Acquired: Thermal Fluctuation Resistance.
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Also crest of storm is pretty much a combination of crest of space and crest of chaos, which combine to make up crest of storm/chaotic space

    Creating Crest... Crest of Blood... Success. (can a person have more than one personal crest?)
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    I think it was [Pain Nullification] not resistance. Since this resistance is not as strong compared to physical attack resistanc entirely[not talking about its crutiality] even V1 Rimuru before he got named had pain nullification.

    Acquiring New Resistances: Heat Resistance, Cold Resistance, Physical Attack Resistance, Electric Resistance, Pain Resistance... Success.
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Yes. Crests are generally like attributes but in the sense that the ones who hold a PERSONAL crest[like Veldora's personal crest is storm, which he can grant to others] are the origins of the attribute itself. It's like "crest" is a term for "concept" and the one who owns the crest is the physical[or spiritual] materialization of the "concept"[crest]. So yes, having more than one crest is possible because theoretically Rimuru[Canon] can have it too

    Creating Crest... Crest of Blood... Success. (can a person have more than one personal crest?)
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  • Astral_Void
    Astral_Void5mth
    Commented

    Ah, finally. Now they should at least evolve into S-rank[AT THE VERY LEAST] because of the amount of magicules they will gain from him, also the naming evolution... ... right... author san???

    When his roaring voice stopped, it was replaced by a feeling of a tsunami of raw magicules crashing into me.
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