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Cantnomore2yrReplied to SithSlayer_74That's a good one.
This paragraph has been deleted.- Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 398 Dream or reality? [3]
- Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 393 Reunion [2]
- Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 116 Chapter 116:The Appearance Of The Myth
- Cantnomore2yrReplied to Mohitkumar
Don't take my words too serious I'm just an average reader releasing my frustration on cliché scenes I dislike. I am sorry if I came off as aggressive in the first comment, I definitely could have wrote that more politely and appropriately. Don't let my negative comments influence your motivation to write, as my words can definitely sound like I'm insulting your skills. I know that it's your first novel and your improving as you go. And you definitely handled the situation with my comment amazingly. I hope you continue to write, as I enjoy the story and watching you improve as you go. Keep up the great work and don't let commenters like me frustrate you!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Cantnomore2yrReplied to Mohitkumar
The previous scene where there faces where up close was pretty good. But this one just came out of no where and completely ruined the intense atmosphere that was being built. I think appropriate placement of this type of scene would be better. No need to get rid of them, just don't plug them in where they don't belong.
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This is just disappointing 😞. I honestly am extremely tired of scenes like this. They are so cliché, overused, and add nothing good to the story other than a way to quickly progress the mc's relationship with a fl with no actual effort to story development, and second hand embarrassment to the reader. Cringy af. I expected better.😔
This paragraph has been deleted. - Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 115 Chapter 115:Facing the giant Calamity[3]
- Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 392 Reunion [1]
- Cantnomore2yrCommented
Honestly, the reunion senerio was handled so much better than I could have thought. It's such a great emotional scene that's well done and thought out. Moments like this that catch you off guard are what make high-quality stories. Good Work Author Entrail_JI 👏 making such an amazing story!💯😀👍
Ch 392 Reunion [1] - Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 390 Broken [4]
- Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 388 Broken [2]
- Cantnomore2yrCommented
What are you doing Step-bro!?! sorry I had to.
"What are you doing Ren!" - Cantnomore2yrCommented
No chapter at the promised time :(
A/N : Another chap later. Time-wise? probably earlier than yesterday. Regarding the usual update time, should return in two days once I get back from my trip. - Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 386 You remember me? [4]
- Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 385 You remember me? [3]
- Cantnomore2yrReplied to Seventynine79
It really was!
"Fuck, where did he go?" - Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 384 You remember me? [2]
- Cantnomore2yrCommentedCh 382 Meeting from afar [2]