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John_Ryan_8278

John_Ryan_8278

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if I say something questionable just pretend it's right hello if you think im dumb so do i I do not want to be horny anymore I just wish to be happy

2022-03-02 JoinedIreland
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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82783h
    Replied to Im_a_shota

    I just got boned by life so I had to fix things sorry for the wait I suppose

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 A Stupid War Filled with stupid people
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to OVERLOAD69

    No because she had her poison to off set her weakness and even that took her life ie she fell into the category of dying to win which is the worst kinda of victory It may be one of the good outcomes but it is the worst of the good outcomes

    The train arc, the entertainment district arc, and the infinity castle arc which was the final arc, There was also the mention of how Shinobu kocho's older sister died fighting the Upper Rank 2, Doma.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to Arthur_Leywin1

    I see I will check it out

    "I'm sorry, ma'am. Your son is Quirkless, my condolences."
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to daoisttian_3

    I’m working off the assumption people want to get better at writing so I will hold them to decent standards

    "Huh," The girl was shocked as the next second she found her face pressed to the ground her sword missing with a hand on the back of her neck, she could only turn her slightly to look at the person who did this, looking back at her were pair of cold purple eyes that sent chills down her spine.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to OVERLOAD69

    Bro you are making some baseless claims about her strength here She is already definitely physically weaker than the other hashira as she is female and doesn’t have that weird super strength that the love hashira has but even with that stupid boast the love hashira wasn’t even the strongest hashira in pure. So for Kanae who has no boast to help her catch up to the others so she will likely be physically the weakest hashira but in return for that I have no doubt she is at least in the top 3 for speed otherwise she simply never would’ve made hashira. Even more than that we already know she got absolutely bodied by a upper demon where as most other hashira 1. Either was strong enough to survive the fight 2. Simply Won the fight 3. Won the fight in exchange for their life. She was not strong enough to do any of these In conclusion there is overwhelming evidence that Kanae was one of the weakest hashira. Strength wise she isn’t worth talking about, speed wise she is good but that will not help her land the killing blow, endurance wise im sure she could last an hour or two in a full power fight but that isn’t worth taking about with demons, and she would likely crumble after one or two full on hits With all the evidence we can say with confidence that if she fights a upper demon the fight would play out like such, Lackinh strenght to finish the demo she would be force to constantly dodge witch she could confidently do for a few hours but she will be constantly worn down and it would no doubt only take a hit or two to put her out of commission so ultimately she is a fodder hashira who couldn’t win a fight with any of the upper moon besides Daki

    The train arc, the entertainment district arc, and the infinity castle arc which was the final arc, There was also the mention of how Shinobu kocho's older sister died fighting the Upper Rank 2, Doma.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to OVERLOAD69

    No but he has confirmed at the very least that there should only be some certain slice of life anime and he’s no doubt already checked for any stupid strong verses So he should already know that at the very least his enemies won’t even be near city level or even city block level and would more like be like town level or lower at least from the info on hand Add that with his already stupid strength that allows him to cut half through upper twos neck he shouldn’t be too fearful He has enough info to know that either his opponent is near his level or that his opponents level is so high that he couldn’t find any information what so ever and you don’t need to be a genuis to figure what is infinitely more likely

    'There are mirrors set along the roads we took and he is fast,' Kanae was a little shocked by this speed, the man was faster than anyone she knew till now, she had also spotted a few mirrors that showed the road behind them, there should be more but she likely missed them.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Posted

    Aight so this is a very rough rewrite at a fic I attempted to write before but for a number of reasons I will list here I have decided to rewrite 1. When I first starting the original I had absolutely no plan and was just going with the flow which you could likely if not for number 2 2. The way I wrote the first one was absolutely trash and didn’t even properly explain what was going on to the reader and this was a mistake born out of me never writing before. I will be trying to counter this problem by rereading my chapters like 5 five times over the span of a few days before posting to make sure they are at least halfway decent 3. The story just flat out made no sense, a few things the I could use as an example would be [A] Tanya getting put into nazarick, Being-X would never allow such good living conditions for Tanya [B] She was OP another thing Being-X wouldn’t let happen so long as she was again him 4. The Chapter were too short for any meaningful things to happen These are just some problems with the previous Fic that I will attempt to fix and I will list how I will attempt to fix these issues 1. She will be born into the new world just a few years before nazarick arrives to ensure she is in a bad position when nazarick does arrive 2. She will have to learn the new power system before she can enhance her powers by praying and this will also ensure she is not strong enough to fight one to one with even the weakest guardian 3. I have already plan out the next 40 or so chapters and the rough out line of the story 4. While she will be weak at the start of the story I have got ideas on fair powers that will allow her battle floor guardians and not get insta killed 5. I will try to ensure no chapter is under 2k in words and I will try to hit 5k in words in most chapters Finally while I can’t guarantee that my story will be any good I can guarantee I will try to at least make it decent so if you wish please give it a shot

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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82781d
    Replied to Arthur_Leywin1

    In other words a good character something that is oddly rare nowadays

    "I'm sorry, ma'am. Your son is Quirkless, my condolences."
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to Dark_Rider01

    The first point is possible but the second isn’t as if a titan shifter dies without transferring their powers they will just go to a random baby The third also isn’t possible as the rest of the world wouldnt just let their mortal enemy gather strength, so they would invade before you can even get your plans into motion

    Rey then tied his hair in a bun, similar to Eren Yeager and wore his usual clothes.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82781d
    Replied to Demons_Multiverse

    Thanks

    However, in some extreme circumstances… Quirk Marriages are to be covered up completely. Even the records were to be erased. The end result for the failure…
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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82781d
    Replied to OVERLOAD69

    She was likely similar in strength to shinobu with no poison to back her up

    The train arc, the entertainment district arc, and the infinity castle arc which was the final arc, There was also the mention of how Shinobu kocho's older sister died fighting the Upper Rank 2, Doma.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to DaoOfCulture

    Nah base normal no energy itadori gets shot

    'There are mirrors set along the roads we took and he is fast,' Kanae was a little shocked by this speed, the man was faster than anyone she knew till now, she had also spotted a few mirrors that showed the road behind them, there should be more but she likely missed them.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Replied to daoisttian_3

    I like op characters so long as they are done right if a character is trashy and op for no reason they are a trash character

    "Huh," The girl was shocked as the next second she found her face pressed to the ground her sword missing with a hand on the back of her neck, she could only turn her slightly to look at the person who did this, looking back at her were pair of cold purple eyes that sent chills down her spine.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82781d
    Replied to daoisttian_3

    Yeah but they rely on good characters and comedy to keep it interesting

    "Huh," The girl was shocked as the next second she found her face pressed to the ground her sword missing with a hand on the back of her neck, she could only turn her slightly to look at the person who did this, looking back at her were pair of cold purple eyes that sent chills down her spine.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82781d
    Replied to OVERLOAD69

    Bro that’s not how the fear of the unknown works

    'There are mirrors set along the roads we took and he is fast,' Kanae was a little shocked by this speed, the man was faster than anyone she knew till now, she had also spotted a few mirrors that showed the road behind them, there should be more but she likely missed them.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82781d
    Replied to Juhiko

    You are hardly weak for getting scared and think that someone is weak for getting scared is preposterous

    He touched his left eyebrow, this was likely going to scar. Not that he particularly cared, though now that he paid attention there was the start of a beard on his face, hair growing on his head, and also his chest.
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter i suppose

    Ch 65 Won't You Be Gone
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  • John_Ryan_8278
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    Commented
    Who's friend, unnoticed, has a look of victory on his face.
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    Commented
    "You're a horrible sister!"
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  • John_Ryan_8278
    John_Ryan_82782d
    Commented

    Jesus she cool

    I'm pulled from my thoughts by Tracy's snort. "Just ignore them." She straightens her back and adopts a snooty tone. "If they wish to deprive themselves from the exultant being known as Misha Potter, then that is their loss. It simply means that we can plot our rise to power in peace."
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