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KirkRittensen

KirkRittensen

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An ambitious teenager writer (16 yo) trying to make something of himself, writing an interconnected multiverse, one bloody, gritty, and sometimes wholesome story at a time.

2022-03-04 JoinedUnited States
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  • KirkRittensen
    KirkRittensen2yr
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    I'm going to do something stupid and cliche and review my own story. I will give myself 5 stars on each of these and proceed to defend them. Writing Quality — 5/5 Stars I would consider myself a decent writer for my age. I am just a teenager and I do not try to make money off these. The stories are free for anyone to read, and I do not intend to lock them. For being free, I'd say these stories are pretty good. Updating Stability — 5/5 Stars The chapters are of different lengths each time, but I would say this gives them a sense of uniqueness, as you never know when you'll get a 500 word chapter, or a 1000 word chapter. Also I update daily/near-daily. Story development — 5/5 Stars With all the cameos from characters in thecaniversum.tumblr.com and the very gritty and dark caniversumcrimes.tumblr.com I'd say the story develops pretty quickly, especially given the fact that part one of the finale to The Book of Narniff is the shortest episode in the series. Character Design — 5/5 Stars I think the character design is really good personally. I may be biased, as I am the novel's author, but I think the characters are given good motivations and their goals are clear enough for any reader to pick up. World Background — 5/5 Stars I think the world is well developed. In the pilot alone, you learn the main location where the story will take place, and some of the main characters, and their motivations. Overall — 5/5 Stars I think overall for an 8 part series with 6.6k total word count I did pretty good. The characters are fleshed out within the first chapters, and this properly sets up and starts the crossover with The Caniversum which continues on thecaniversum.tumblr.com. Thanks for checking out my review. Happy reading! :)

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  • KirkRittensen
    KirkRittensen2yr
    Replied to DemonKingSteven

    Why is it trash though?

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    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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