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  • Kjv_Kjv
    Kjv_Kjv2yr
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    I still can't understand the concept of the world, but it seems it's pretty legit since the Gods (Diviners) always reboot the Universe all over again, but still after this you need to give this Webnovel a full encyclopedia in order for your readers to understand. Even the power system is rebooted, damn .... note: After reading the recent chapters

    I Level Up To Fight The Gods
    Fantasy · KJVZeanso
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  • Kjv_Kjv
    Kjv_Kjv2yr
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    This is the same story, is it? but it seems the story had a better plot now since you add some stories with the opening since I see the two of the previous novels are so barren in concept and motives. But please continue, the cover is awesome and the story seems to get more legit. Props for you author.

    I Level Up To Fight The Gods
    Fantasy · KJVZeanso
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  • Kjv_Kjv
    Kjv_Kjv2yr
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    You need to give us a proper world background author, otherwise, we wouldn't understand where and when the story takes place. By the way, I begin to notice that the story had similarities with My Solo Revenge. Is this story happening in the same universe as it? or (based on the My Solo Revenge's lore), does this tory happens in one of its Timelines?

    Child from the Dungeon
    Fantasy · KJVZeanso
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  • Kjv_Kjv
    Kjv_Kjv2yr
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    Very nice concept, after the recent chapters I've already seen the Solo Leveling inside this Webnovel but it seems you give it a stealthy and horror approach which is cool to see shadow soldiers literally just grab you from the shadows rather than fight you in the light, it reminds me of every stealth game characters.

    Child from the Dungeon
    Fantasy · KJVZeanso
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  • Kjv_Kjv
    Kjv_Kjv2yr
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    The problem with this Webnovel is not the writing as it somehow keeps getting better over time, but the problem of this story is about the choice of the MC which is a very abstract one unlike Rangga Twelve, the one that is introduced in the prologue that has total determination to become more powerful. But it seems to me that, the reason why you chose the Younger MC is to make him get more powerful since the younger the MC, the longer time of chance of him getting stronger which is quite understandable for me but still Rangga Twelve should be the MC of this story, rather than him being like a buff or some sort of the Past Live Avatars, for example, the likes of Avatar Roku and the others.

    My Solo Revenge Against the Divine
    Fantasy · KJVZeanso
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  • Kjv_Kjv
    Kjv_Kjv2yr
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    The MC's main weapon is Shield and the MC's power came from his past lives or 'past versions' if this Webnovel calls them which solely reminds me of the Avatar. Or .... Hey Author let me ask you this, is this character a Leveling Avatar?

    My Solo Revenge Against the Divine
    Fantasy · KJVZeanso
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  • Kjv_Kjv
    Kjv_Kjv2yr
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    It seems this Webnovel has a good start as this could be very interesting since the 'Reboot' concept is implemented here as like what I see in the MVM latest chapter that tells about the Loop or some sort which makes me wonder if that's the same thing since you say that this Webnovel is in the same timeline.

    My Solo Revenge Against the Divine
    Fantasy · KJVZeanso
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