xanxus131
I'm trying to write, since I really like light novels and fanfics. If you have any opinion on how I can improve, feel free to tell me. thanks for reading my stories and supporting me
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thank you
If you have any idea how the story could be improved or if you want the MC to form a relationship with a girl (who is from the marvel movies) don't hesitate to tell me and I'll see if I can add it to the story - xanxus1311yrReplied to Echii_SamaCh 7 7
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from what I read from a page that talks about the comic from which the image comes, it is a fusion of gosht rider with venom, which is different from the fact that venom has the powers and that venom can give the power of ghost rider I don't know if it's true, but I suppose it may be because when Venom joined with the host of the spirit of revenge they became one and if the host died the spirit would stay with Venom since with what I said before they became one what follows being different from that venom can copy and have the power of ghost rider, thanks anyway since you gave me an idea of how I can make my MC have the powers of ghost rider, but that would be for much later since I want to focus first in the marvel movies before making a jump to other universes and like I said I also don't want to give my MC too many powers and the story gets boring.
Ch 6 6 - xanxus1311yrReplied to Hexmonkey_2020
deadpool interacts with many heroes and he pops heads as if it were common
"Let's start" I leave my guest on the floor, I had already completely taken over his body and erased all the information that was in his brain now he is just a puppet, if they checked him in a hospital they would think he was in a coma or a vegetative state . - xanxus1311yrReplied to Hexmonkey_2020
claws and blades can not face thor's hammer, but I think if you shoot it with a weapon that has the tesseract as a battery you could face it
"I have to find someone who knows how to shoot to learn" it seems that for now I can only use weapons at close range. - xanxus1311yrReplied to Echii_Sama
later in the story he thought to remove that weakness With the powers I think a Klintar would not be able to absorb Ghost Rider's powers because his powers don't come directly from his genes, rather a fallen angel gives him his powers, regarding Quiksilver and Scarlet Witch in the movies I think it was the mind gem that gave him his powers, but mostly i don't want to give the MC a lot of OP powers and the story gets boring. also the powers of rimiru tempest are not exactly the same as those of a klintar, although they are very similar
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jaja xd I thought that the weapon would be held by a tentacle, but you made me laugh
"can I make them appear anywhere on my body?" So I try to make the weapons come out of different parts of my body and I confirm my theory, well it's time to test my aim, I put the weapons back in my hands since I think it will be easier that way, since I was human before, I It is more familiar than having them on other parts of the body. - xanxus1311yrReplied to ONGFRFR
I was thinking of doing the whole marvel movie saga first since I don't know how to combine very well with the comics, but maybe there will come a time when I will travel to the comics universe
second, I want to meet the heroes and villains that I remember from the movies and comics if they exist, above all I want to interact with the female protagonists, because even though I no longer have my human body I still like them and maybe form a romantic relationship with someone. .... or with various . - xanxus1311yrReplied to mofumofumofuCh 5 5
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yes, later
second, I want to meet the heroes and villains that I remember from the movies and comics if they exist, above all I want to interact with the female protagonists, because even though I no longer have my human body I still like them and maybe form a romantic relationship with someone. .... or with various .