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I don't mind if it's a man going around sleeping with everyone because it's part of male nature to spread his seed and ensure the possibility of having children. But for females, it's about selecting the best genes for her child—like how successful, how tall the man is, how strong he is, and if he can keep her safe, etc. But I hate it when it's a woman doing this kind of thing; it makes me sick. This feeling is primal for every man for as long as humanity history. I understand she wants to get back at her husband, and it's part of the system, but why does she have to sleep with everyone? I understand this is a novel, but I dislike the whole concept
I understand, but I'm just saying use ChatGPT to fix the issues, and it's free. It won't take too long to get it fixed. It will spell check and fix all errors. It's frustrating when people jump on a novel that has a good idea but isn't written by the best English speakers. I always wonder why they don't use Grammarly or ChatGPT to fix these issues, and it won't take that long. Sigh.
not bad good writing, it's just weirdly heavy with all the secondary knowledge, I find myself just skipping the unending descriptions on things and especially the politics and schemes, they just kinda happen by front loading copious amounts of exposition and expecting people to follow along with the convoluted nonsense, also I think you went to big to quickly introducing universe level concepts before he barely steps out of his first sect is a good way to burn yourself out and the readers, overall meh I read it a little at a time when other novels are updating
Writing Quality: The writing feels lacking, akin to a story penned by a young child. Even my 10-year-old nephew, who has begun writing his own novels out of his love for reading, exhibits better skills. try to use chatgpt to fix this writing it very easy. Stability of Updates: It's disappointing to wait a whole year for just 47 chapters. Story Development: The protagonist is overpowered from the start, leaving no room for development. Character Design: Like the story development, the character is overpowered with no growth or depth in design. World Background: The story relies heavily on pre-existing worlds, lacking originality or depth in world-building.
grammar and spelling is Awful there something called chatgpt __________________________________________________________________________________________
Zeel Crawford is the worst character I've ever read in a novel. Even if you have no emotions, there is something called common sense, and he has none. Although he's smart, he always resorts to killing people in response to everything. Even after 400 chapters, he hasn't changed much. This story is about a frustrating NPC