please tell me the MC isn't just murder murder everybody if so this is super boring I don't want to read about psychotic freaking people who think about murder all the time obviously the author thinks about it cuz they can just tell that by the way he writing psychotic freak.

also in the synopsis they said it was during the graduation not a reunion

completely agree any novel as a Time skip like that where it's a harem is just retarded I stopped reading this book as of now

okay first things first writing quality is a four it's not bad not many grammar mistakes and you can understand it. second story development is a one of the story development is absolutely horrid it is so hard to keep track of this story one minute he's born the next minute he's at an academy the next minute he's dead then he's a woman then he's not a woman f****** impossible to keep track of this s*** new characters are thrown in so fast with no building that can't feel connection to any of the characters. third character design that ties into my previous comment but the character design is s*** 4th updating stability is probably the best thing about it solid 7 chapters a week or more really good point there. little background the second one star rating it is absolutely horrid like the worst I've ever seen I mentions the world a little bit it mentions different realms but doesn't do a good job of explaining them doesn't do a good job of anything about them. oh and one more thing books that tie in big events early on in the books are just stupid like right now I've seen God level characters I've seen characters that control entire universes there's a thing here called the administrator who's basically more powerful than any God and all these were introduced to a guy whose power level is probably 30 40 times less than these beings they shouldn't be a thing. this just makes it harder to follow the story if you introduce a character who's really close to the MC whose power level is that above a God and then the MC whose power level is just about an adult human powerful human of course but yeah.

when does it change I am literally going to skip every chapter until I get there if not count me out of reading your book I have something like 10,000 coins saved up your loss there's thousands of other books on here I can read.

it said 10

people forget that while money can buy power it in itself is not power power is power beating a man with your own hands in a fair fight or in a fight in general is power money is not power money can hire power. but it is not power for example there might be a wealthy billionaire or in this example this lady who's a wealthy probably billionaire or even probably trillionaire but she herself cannot fight an entire army she has to hire people and have subordinates and that's what revolutions come from when they're being when the subordinates are mistreated or believe they're mistreated and they revolt showing that the people with the money and who believe they have the power don't have as much power as they thought because it can always change hands and money is a concept that isn't infinite.

I forgot about it as well but finally I'm so glad this author doesn't forget things earlier on in his book way to go.

he kind of did hesitate for at least a few seconds he pondered it

it's okay cuz even one chapter a day is really good compared to the some novels I've seen on here

I really love this authors books the way he writes and everything he's a really good writer. it's also really rare to see these kind of novels with a American or Western character in them which is much appreciated because a big part of web novel is the western side of the world mainly America and it gets really grating to read novels about Chinese men or Japanese men or Korean men set in those countries it's hard for Americans to relate it's one of the things I love about this author. even the characters who don't live in the US which is the majority of his major popular works they're still having American background.

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confused right now is the blood battle a game or the capsule because it mentions it as a capsule down below and above but right here it's saying it's a game and that's super confusing

slums.... another cliche

one more thing I'd like to point out on top of my previous comments it says more than 100,000 a month that could mean one made is getting a billion a month you don't know cuz the Arthur didn't clarify so let's say he's giving out a billion a month to just one made times it's a 20 staff that's 20 billion a month that's way more than he's making now

yeah it's not just for one staff though it's enough to staff a mansion which is more than one so you're going to have to do not 100,000 but like 2 million . on top of that most of his money or assets is in fixed assets as I have already said above like paintings cars stuff like that and you can't pay with those does that make sense like if you have an employee you can't pay them with expensive watch cuz there's such a thing as taxes and stuff

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola