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Time_Series_44443mthCommentedI hope he doesnt hide it from alicia for long
Since Rey had to play the fool, she had to tell him all about the Royal Dungeon Incident—at least, what she heard from what everyone was saying.- Time_Series_44444mthReplied to Riassuba
thats why the undead cult guy said he was "bait", bait is supposed to be attractive.
Captain Murphy opened the personal file in front of her, looked at the word "Sin Soldier" on it, and fell into thought. - Time_Series_444411mthCommented
you didn't bring her to your house at all.
"My mom, you know... well,she's just excited since you are the first girl I've ever brought to my house; just don't take that stuff to heart." I sighed. Other than Mary, she might be the only girl I've ever brought home with me. - Time_Series_44441yrCommentedCh 34 Chapter 0034. Rage
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Instead of trying to asspull their 'closeness' in a flashback after her death you could have actually written it...
The days spent with Jeze suddenly started flashing in front of my eyes. She was the only person I had opened up to after years, she was always cheerful, prideful and righteous. She always prioritised everyone else's happiness before hers. - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
cringe
Chapter 0034. Rage - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
I'm wondering how any of this makes any sense? Grivantula is a level 140 MINI-boss, and mc is 120. However, as a legendary class, it shouldnt be too much to compare him to a common class level 140 player. The question is, are those players meant to be the same as useless insects when compared to a mini boss? Do you need a few thousand of them to defeat one or something? Maybe they arent meant to play at all.
Ch 33 [Bonus chapter] | Chapter 0033. Grivantula - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
business opportunityyyy make an arena right now
What if they found a place where their mana and HP regenerated by 200% more than what they are used to? They would go insane with happiness. - Time_Series_44441yrCommentedCh 9 Chapter 0009. Weird Old Man
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ridiculous
"Boss, these guys are poor pigs. None of them has a single copper coin on their bodies or anything valuable." - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
Stupid. Now all players are immune to robbery? I hope not, and that he loses some coins at least.
I said nervously to the bandit leader. It was true, I didn't have any valuables on my body except my clothes. The rest of the items and coins were in my inventory. - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
cant vr authors move on from troupes like 'the company behind the scenes watching the protagonist' ?
Kibea Corporation's head office. - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
shanker?
[Eclipse - The Shanker of Faded Memories - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
Are ALL the hunter blades in the world identical?
'Scam, a fucking scam!' - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
to 30% or by 30%?
[Wyvern Prytiz, The Keeper of Eclipse, is a master of ice. All types of ice-related magic and skill effects will be reduced to 30% during combat.] - Time_Series_44441yrCommented
The i's are all meant to be in capital like this: I and the " , " is to be placed before the ' and near the last letter, like this: example,' not: example ', ... I may be wrong because I'm not even a native, but I'm probably right. What you need to do is simply some basic proofreading.
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