you should give another special ability like time maniplulation as (cyromancy + spear) has become overused is not that interesting anymore
author , please don't make lucas original backstory like in his 1 st life he was a loser as in the original novel . he was sent back in time after Sam destroyed his world to change the future. make him more like that of Kevin in apov or that he was crazy or psycho from his first life .
or what if this all is single fl is just a facade and lucas will end up with noah
please don't make it harem but a single love interest who will help over come his twisted and insane personality would make it more interesting.
author, please make mc enter with backing of Melvix family as it is more logical this way than hiding your background troupe which has already been used multiple times.
story is up until now is good. will mc have more affinities other than lighting and ice . ice is becoming quite common now every novel of this genre use ice as mc affinity